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I must say I prefer obsessive Malfoy instead of abusive dom. You wouldn't want to disgrace Malfoy name by not being gentleman, would you? Hehe.

So far, the plot sounds interesting. Keep updating, I'll keep reviewing too!

First off, YAY, betas are fantastic. SOOOOOOOOO much better. This scene was amazing. Great strong Granger and slightly malevolent dommish Draco.

I think she might be in for a surprise.

As for abusive or obsessive. I think its clear he's obsessed so it's not really a choice is it? I don't think he'd hurt her (purposely), he wants her and I'm pretty sure he wants to keep her so I'm sure she'll be preggers before the end of year. Its below him to abuse anyone, it's a sign of no control and Draco is, in your words, always in control.

obsessiveDom!!!obsessiveDom!!!obsessiveDom!!!
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Aww, this is getting more and more interesting! I do hope that you don't go intot he dubcon/noncon side with this, as even though he can be dominant, forcing her would not be cool.

After that warning
I sure as hell know that he can control me that's for sure

I think you could combine the two just a bit. Start out abusive and then move to just obsessive. Lovely chapter dear. I really do think you're awesome.
Cheers!
G.C.

Obsessive definitely - there are too few of those, most make him a masochistic evil git - not obsessive and jealous;)

I feel very uncomfortable with stories wherein Hermione suffers abuse. I don't think dominance necessarily requires physical force or verbal abuse in order to assert itself. If he's truly in contol, it will be obvious to Hermione. I would prefer to see him best her psychologically. She would not only admit to that more easily, but it will reinforce in her respect for him. From that respect trust can follow, and I think that complete trust between the parties should really be the basis of any dominant-submissive relationship. If Hermione can't trust him, all you are doing is using her as the butt of abuse. I don't think I would be interested in reading that kind of story, sorry.

Yea !! I love a Dom!Draco. What I am curious about is a Light!Pansy and Light!Blaise wanting to save their families from the Dark Lord. Just how many scenarios can be made from that idea. Believe? Trust? Betrayal? Who is betrayed? etc.

I want him to be a bit of both....if thats possible????? Abusive and obsessive.....hehehehehehehe!! You have a great way with words, your story made me grin loads!!!! Update soon please!!!
xoxo