rate_review Reviews

I love this story, i love a dominate Draco, it's so much fun!!! he should be an obsessive Dom. I think that Malfoy Sr. would be the abusive one, I personally think that it would be a little too much "father like son" thing and Hermione hates his father.

Mmmmmm...I love your story so far! It's very promising. I love the 'controling' Draco, and since you asked I vote for 'obsessive' controling Draco. I much prefer when Hermione is screaming in pleasure and moaning with joy and Draco is being his sex-god self, posessive and demanding. Ooo. Such fun! Look forward to your next chapter!

WOW! i like your story.

I think Draco is going to be very surprised (and not in a good way) at the extent of Hermione's knowledge. Just because she doesn't cast the spells, doesn't mean she doesn't know them. One can always have knowledge of something without ever putting that knowledge to use, though in Hermione's case, she doesn't put her full knowledge to use.

I like that Hermione isn't all waify and weak-kneed right away.
Personally, I feel like Draco must be attracted to Hermione, at least in part, because of her fiery personality. Therefore, it seems a bit illogical that he would be abusive, that he would want to 'train' that out of her, or whatever. Does that make sense?
Anyway, good work so far. Keep it up!

I think Draco is an obsessive dom but that is just me. Oh well can't wait for the next chapter I hope it is just a little bit longer than the last one.

While I am enjoying the story so far; it is a very interesting concept. In regards to Draco I think you should make him 'obsessive' dominate that is maybe a bit abusive. He is a Malfoy after all and must do what is required to maintain his status both in society and with his family. Hermione seems to be in character so far, which I also enjoy. On a side note I checked out your profile and I must admit that I am very hasten to get too wrapped in this fic since you have submitted several stories and not finished any of them. I am not pointing this out to make this review a flame; I am simply calling it to your attention. I am positive I am not the only reader who does this and I have a feeling it will affect your number of hits and reviews. I hope that you do not base whether or not you will continue by the number of reader responses because if you do I can see you getting discouraged very quickly. I say this because I noticed many of your stories have rather low views and responses for the amount of time that have been available. I am positive it is because your stories have been left unfinished; readers do not want to get burned by falling for a story that may not be completed. I sincerely wish that you will continue with this story until it is finished because I really do enjoy your writing style and I think the plot has a tremendous amount of potential. I wish you all the luck and hope to see more of this story soon.

a little bit of both dom's for draco

Officially my favorite Draco/Hermione fiction at the moment =D

I've seen Draco written as both abusive and obsessive, why limit yourself to one Dom trait.
But I definitely do favor him being obsessive more. It's just so attractive in a dark way.
:)

Mmm I like the obessive dom more.