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for The Pairing Hat

by elibdally

schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for that consideration to us that do not found non-consent sex attrative or sexy... Hey they will have in this fic 2 sons? Please take it to the extreme and put twin daughters to the mix that will be great too... The more the merrier! LOL So keep them coming this is getting very intresting...
person kazfeist
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate your taking the fans' wishes into consideration. It is your story, after all, but I suppose a big reason for why you write is that you want folks to read your work. :D I liked the fourth chapter very much. It's good to see Draco's thoughts and the fact that his parents will not be against this union should ease things for our couple. :D
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooo. I would love to see him obsessive dom. I have read lots of stories where he is abusive dom (which I don't mind at all) But I think in this one I would like to see him in another light. I love the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter! Please hurry - my heart is a flutter with the promises Draco has laid out for Hermione.... *Eyes get a glazed look as FuzzyDraco dreams about what might be*
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely LOVING this story! This was a wonderful chapter. I like Draco's relationship with Lucius. They aren't all fuffy but you can tell there is mutual admiration. I think it would be very interesting to see Draco's reaction to Hermione's relationship with her family and maybe the jealousy of seeing her be so easily affectionate when she holds out on him. If you can't get another beta, I'd be willing to be an option. I'd love to collaborate. Cheers!

G.C.
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person mhaj78
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, this was a great chapter! i'm so glad to see an update--and it was a long one, too! awesome. i'm fine with whether he's obsessive or abusive...or non-con sex. i think as long as the appropriate disclaimers are in place, we as adults can choose what to read or not to read. but regardless of what you decide, i'm on board and looking forward to reading more!
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
like this story, agree with your author's note, he's possesive...sorry can't spell at the moment....not abusive. He is confidant and sure of himself and he knows what he wants. I would mind that kind of man for myself. I can totally see him trying to seduce her throught out this...can't wait for more.
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm so sorry it took me so long to get back with you; I just sent you an e-mail. This story is shaping up to be pretty good. I personally can deal with a Dominate Draco, but not an Abusive Draco. Obssessive Draco is okay as long as it doesn't lead to the point of basic insanity.
- Cynthia
person KELMO
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story
person Cascada
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
obsessive dom please!!
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well it doesnt matter if Draco's an abusive Dom or not......people who are into submisson and domination know that theres always a safe word.....and the submissive really holds the power becasue of the safeword.