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Thought that was a fantastic beginning xxx

Please add more xx

A continuation!? Yes!!!

this is really a nice twist. i can just see where this is going..i hope to be laughing my butt off throughout this story.please post more soon. great story.

There's several spelling errors, but it's an intriguing start. You've piqued my interest. I'll stick around for the moment, but I hope you can keep me interested. BTW, it's 'squib' not 'squeed'.

excellent story. i am waiting for the next chapter

Well, fun premise, like your writing. I am a bit confused, though. Dumbledore didn't really spell out what was going to happen to these
'pairs'. Are they essentially married? Is this more of a 'getting to know you' stage? In what way do they have to be together? Do they have apartments in Hogwarts or are they just in regular dorms? And once that is established, what are the penalties for dating someone who was not chosen by the pairing hat? What are the options if someone chooses to quit school and rebel? Are they being forced to reproduce during their school days? So many questions... will love to find out how you develop this.

I SO wanna see where this ends up. Can't wait. :)

This story has Gryffindorclutz written all over it. It has delicious potential written all over it. More so like another twist to the MLC, which has long since been scarred.