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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, he's going to confuse the hell out of her isn't he? Laughing really hard.
PS: You should give it a once over read-through before posting...there were some mistakes here that made some of the sentences just funny "Great Hole"???? LMAO! Sorry. Thanks for the update.
PS: You should give it a once over read-through before posting...there were some mistakes here that made some of the sentences just funny "Great Hole"???? LMAO! Sorry. Thanks for the update.
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awh yes you are updating, but your teasing ! lol leaving us at a cliffhanger. :P
oh well i cant wait for the next chapter :D
oh well i cant wait for the next chapter :D
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it's all making sense now. I just needed to wait for another chapter. It will be interesting to see if Draco can get her on his side.
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
its the great hall not the great hole
good story though
good story though
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've already alluded to the fact that Draco likes Hermionne so I'd like to see a lighter side of Draco. But, he's really gotta work to win her over. Even with a scorching kiss, she's not likely to believe that he's not just wanting to use her for fun and bragging rights. That's just my take. Thanks for asking for our opinions.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like, I really like it. Please keep up the good work.
Thanks
Thanks
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you got me interested. lol I think you already know you've got a winner here and simply MUST update again. :-) Sooner than later, please? I look forward seeing how these pairings fare. Thanks! HG4eva
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You might want to leave the DNA out of the explanations, even if it does help characterize Hermione. It's not actually explained enough for the explanation to make any sense--not being mated properly should be sufficient. Also, if the girls are not actually being married off, but just being aggressively pushed into pairings, I think they wouldn't acquire new last names. btw, squeeds -->> squibs Most schools wouldn't allow sex on their grounds, so the rooming situations should be interesting.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it!!! hope you'll keep it up.
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's certainly interesting. Very fresh perspective on the sorting hat.
Question: will you be finishing your other fics? I do like your stories but find myself frustrated at them not being finished. *ducks to avoid flying object* Don't hate me!
PS: just noticed a few spelling and grammar errors but certainly not enough to detract from the interesting plot.
Question: will you be finishing your other fics? I do like your stories but find myself frustrated at them not being finished. *ducks to avoid flying object* Don't hate me!
PS: just noticed a few spelling and grammar errors but certainly not enough to detract from the interesting plot.