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enjoying your story; especially the big reveal! I've wanted to write a scene like that myself. I do feel a bit sorry for Pansy, though.

Hey there! Of course, I have faith in you! :-) You are doing a fabulous job. I really enjoyed Sirius and Remus being back (YEAH!!!!), Draco's confusion, his understanding and awe of Severus, Sev's defense of Draco, the realism of the entire scene, and the love that flowed through it. Pansy and Ron...wow, you made me feel sorry for her. And, go Ron!!! What a mature way to handle things. I also loved his desire to "prove" himself in the end. lol All in all a great chapter!!! Thank you, HG4eva

Wow! This is a mammoth sized chapter! I love the fact you've brought Sirius back i think it was a mistake for JRR to kill him off, though i understand it that she wanted to make it so Harry had nothing of his own left. Enough of that though, this is your story and it just keeps getting better and better! I wish i could write like you, it's a rare gift (though some would disagree but i've read some bad ficiton in my life, The Golden Compass being one of them! Sorry is you like it lol!) i think in a writer to be able to transport the reader to their world, but you do this effortlessly. I can't wait for an update as usual!

I absolutely love this chapter. There are too many things to love! From Ginny (I love Ginny :D), to Sirius' behavior around Draco, to Severus' speech..especially his speech..especially the part about praising Hermione but saying he will lie and say he never praised her at all if Draco told her! That part made me giggle! I also loved the part with Pansy and Ron. Usually when people pair that couple together, it irks me. Only because it seems like since Draco doesn't want Pansy and Hermione and Ron stay friends in a D/H fic, they kinda mash Ron and Pansy together just because. But you made it new and refreshing! Thank you! And I love your Ron! I love that he isn't the screaming jerk making Hermione cry about being with Draco. But I also love that he isn't accepting of their relationship either. In too many fics Harry or Ron need to be accepting of Hermione's relationship with Draco so that they can soothe her when the other boy gets all pissy about it. Usually Harry is the accepting one. But anyway, I always look forward to seeing your fic updated! I think it's brilliant and a breath of fresh air! I'm actually glad you didn't continue with the chocolates, as that would make the fic kinda boring after a while. Thank you so much for continuing this fic and not just making it a one shot! Thank you, thank you, thank you. I cannot say that word enough.

I'm Pansy and Ron got together. They each deserve someone, and I think they're a good couple in your representation.

Hi just wanted to let you know that I finished reading from start to finish the current chapters and your story is awesome!! Loved it, can't wait till the next chapter ;)

Yay. Just, yay, on so many levels. For Sirius being alive, for Draco manning up and for Pansy being more than a shrieking harridan. Fantastic new chapter. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Oh how sweet this chapter is. I love how Draco was received by the order and how they agreed to not put him in harms way. I also love Snapes reaction to Draco's change of heart and his support of Hermione's and his relationship. It just reminds me of how endearing Snape's love for Lilly was and how it was so strong that he even extended that dedication towards Potter, even if Harry is the son of his childhood nemesis too.

This chapter (13) was particularly well done. I liked that Pansy and Ron made up, too. Nice work!

Hello,
Chapter 13 was a great treat. I do hope Harry yanks the stick in 14, because all the angst and "poor mes" wear me out. I hope Hermione isn't left in the dark too long, and I like your Ron. I'm not a big Ron fan, but that doesn't mean he has to be evil. I like that Pansy chose him, and told him so. I also liked him saying "I've got 5 older brothers" it made me laugh. Poor Pansy must have been raised with an odd set of morals. I can't wait until Mrs. Weasley gets ahold of her and teaches her some stuff. Good luck with 14 and don't rush it, it seems like you like to take your time to get it right.
Thanks,
Jillian