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I am hoping that you are going to continue this story and am looking forward to the next update!

Lucky me, I happened along this FABULOUS story after you'd written the second chapter. I am so thrilled that you decided to continue with this story. As a one shot it was indeed fantastic but I'm so glad you were persuaded to write more. I can totally understand Hermione wanting a bit of chocolate after sucha horrendous day (although bumping into Snape would have been a delicious highlight too) but I wouldn't have stopped at two. LOL I'm wondering if the two chocolates combined to make her remember everything long after the supposed heart chocolate's potion/charm wore off or because there was an attraction there between them in the first place, their feelings overcame what the chocolate was supposed to do. Love that she smiled at him when she woke up and he began to realise that she did enjoy being with him and that message on the shower door and his reaction - loved that too!!

And then the next morning while they're 'pretending not to look at each other' - how I enjoyed the Hermione's thoughts of the talent at school and the conversation at the Slytherin table. It was so funny how Hermione went through her candidates, even contemplating Snape (grins) before admiting to herself that the 'bad boy' was the one she wanted all along. (Heck, any of the 'bad boys' you mentioned in this story work for me) And then to 'hear' that conversation where Pansy was so desperately trying to make herself look better than the 'mudblood' while Theo and Blaise egged her on and admitted that they wouldn't mind a go at Hermione either - LOL Draco must have been going spare trying to keep his thoughts to himself. I get the feeling that Blaise and Theo would actually be supportive of Draco if he were to make his intentions known regarding Hermione and I love that idea too and I don't mind reading about a narky Pansy either so it will be interesting to see what nasty little schemes she has going on. So, in summary - bring on the next chapter - I can't wait. :)

That was an amazing chapter. I love how you went inside each of them to let us know what they were thinking and feeling. This chapter did not need any hot amazing sex it was perfect just the way it was. And Pansy is a royal bitch, I just hope she does not hurt Hermione too much.

Sevibaby

Awesome update...remember reading ch 1 and loved the update!!!

Well done, funny and great writing. I was amused by the bit with Snape -- was he ogling Hermione too? Hee.

....wow. Just wow. That was freakin awesome! You did great for your first HP fic..or so I think it was your first. Anyway, please write more. When I finished I went to your profile looking for more HP stories you had written only to find this was the only one! D: I need more! You are one of the few writers whose style that I enjoy. So, please, write more.

I really liked this. I hope you write more, if not this story, then more Draco/Hermione.

This is brilliant. Are you sure you want to leave it just as a one shot?

this was super awesome and refreshingly different charmed chocolates what a way to go I'd love to see what ou do with his story so please please please continue on!

I loved it! Please consider extending it. It was angst free and kinda sweet...not enough Dramoines out there like that! Absolutely the best story I read today.