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for In Need of a Little Comfort

by Monddame

schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have got to get some of those chocolates!! lol Forgetful Fog...loved it! And, I like that he certainly doesn't hate her. ;-) Can't wait for more! HG4eva
person katiekrm
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
May I please have a box of those chocolates? I love Draco's earnestness in wanting to have a chance with Hermione. They both realize all they have going against them. Draco just needs to open up a bit. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops.
person Niki
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG please continue!!!! /I lOVE IT!!
person Eppie
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic. I'm not much for reviewing, but I had to tell you that you are doing a great job. Keep it coming.
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I just read the 1st two chapters of your story. And I have to say that I LIKE IT!!!
I am glad that you decided to continue with the story verses one chapter only. I am looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Keep up the great work and i cannot wait to read more!!!!!
person Sheep
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story, and i also am really shocked that this is your first fanfic, its an amazing and really unique idea and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more of it, id love to see it turned from a 2-shot to a story please! I love the idea that she might eat more of his chocolates just to coax him into bed again :) Its a really hot protrayel of draco and i hope you'll keep writing b.c i sure will keep reading :)
PLEASE stay with it!
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very glad you decided to continue this and make it a true story. I like your writing style a lot. You've already made me feel for both of them. Now you just need to find a way to get them together, happy, their friends accepting, and Pansy in pain. :-) Easy, right? lol Seriously, good job so far and I look forward to more soon! Thanks, HG4eva
person k_rm
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely!!! ssssteamy!!!
oh my... finally someone noticed that oneshoots can be more than that! yay!
thanks for keeping on writting...
I'll be eagerly waiting for and update (and see what's Pansy up to?)
say, do you have a livejournal, or a fanfiction.net profile too? I'd love to check them if so!
well... see ya... scratch that: read ya until next time!
Ciao!


person Anon
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope u write a third chapter. It has alot of potential and I completely love it.
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I'm so grateful to find another fanifc that is both interesting and well written!
This was a fun start & I look forward to seeing how it develops.