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by Monddame

schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hello,

I feel for Hermione. I have hypoglycemia and can pass out if I'm not careful eat every two to three hours or monitor myself. It's the crappiest feeling ever, often when my sugar is too low, i'll actually puke at the scent of food, making eating harder. I'd probably be in a coma after two days of not eating. As a parent, I make two things for dinner every night" take it or leave it. I won't force it, but they're not getting a scrap of food until the next meal if they refuse a meal. I'm not a short order cook, but I also know the taboo foods and avoid them. My biggest struggle is with meat, bread and cheese. My daughter will not eat these foods at all and they're important for her to develop normally. So far, the take it or leave it rule works for us. Although I know that I'll be in for a rough ride later on, right now it's easy to say what I mean and mean what I say when it comes to rules.

I like how you're giving little teasers about someone (possibly Pansy?) who is plotting something involving a mystery guy. It really grabs me and leaves me wanting more for next time. I hope we find out about the odd look that Snape sent Hermione in clas before giving her a detention.

Thanks for sharing,
Jillian
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was a very lovely opening scene....and I just adore the three Slytherin hotties...mmm mmm good.

okay, I'm beginning to think the girl is NOT Pansy....hmmm, who could it be?

PS: sorry, one con-crit...FYI for future stories: Hermione couldn't have drug herself to the bathroom, she'd be medicated....she dragged herself there....sorry, pet peeve. :-) *ducks quickly to avoid flying shoe*
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, he's in over his head methinks. I love the way you portray Theo and Blaise, still a Slytherin but Grffyindorish at the same time. ( The loyalty to Draco lol) I think they've just become my second favourite characters.
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay I want to know who the last scene was with. I'm thinking Ginny and someone else. But I'm praying it's not hermione, cause that would be horrible. update soon please.
person DarQuing
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I apologize, I wasn't aware they could be seen as back-handed compliments, I thought they were compliments based on my observances of the Harry Potter fandom in general. :(

It was nice seeing that side of Draco. I wonder how Ron and Harry will react when they find out what's been going on? :) Ron, in my opinion, will totally fly off the handle while Harry will stew for awhile, let his anger start to work its way out of his system, and then talk to Hermione. Then again how you write them is likely going to be different than how I'd write them. :)

*waits semi-patiently for the next update* :)
person kittycat30
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor girl! I felt so sorry for her at the beginning... Now, I'm pretty much jealous! Moving on to the next chapter :)
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey another great chapter!!! you are doing an awesome job!!! keep up the great work!!
person Crittenz
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and it's so well written ^^
person Lori
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is most interesting to me. I love reading draco hermione stories and with the twist of enchanted chocolate you have me drooling in more ways than one! I look forward to reading more! I can't help but wonder if one of the chocolates in the box would have a giggle inducing charm on it.
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Yay!

I got a speciall mention on last chapter (former penname: 'k_rm')! *grins*
Well... thanks for that (as for the chapter itself), and for the information too...

Funny you mention it, some of the best authors I've read, started at ff.net and droped it...
For one thing the single feature I miss, from ff.net is that you can mark your favorite authors or stories, and get some e-mails, whenever they publish something new or update... -Can anybody tell me if there's a feature like that in this site?- Be sure you'll be on both of my 'keep-an-eye-on' lists!

Still I'll be checking round here for updates, on a regular basis ; )

Again: thank you for a lovely, steamy, tender chapter.

Keep bring on the new ideas and may you have the proper rest every author needs to get more creative... errr... speaking of wich, I'll be having some for myself now, as a matter of fact!

Take Care!!!

~k~
(the girl that will never be able to see 'old-plain-chocolate' as itself anymore... jajaja... yum! wonder where can i get a box of those treats for myself? XD )