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Yeah, Margot Gentry (Forgotten Things over at FF.net) has said the same thing about my guessing ability. :D Loved this update, and I love your names for the chocolates! You might take a lot at the Jacques Torres chocolate site: mr.chocolate.com. It's got lovely pictures of his handmade chocolates, both dark and milk. They might be inspirational. I know for a fact they're delicious. :D

LOL I'm still too dumb to be 100% sure who our mysterious little bitch, er I mean, witch is, but I would have kept reading anyway. And I'm so glad that Draco's decided that Voldermort can't fuck Hermione either. LMAO You are just so brillliant with your comedy. :) But OMG, the Weasley twins (or at least one half) - I did not see that coming. Oh and who was the older woman (Lucius's "friend") that Draco had his way with and got terrified into the bargain?????

Have to add though, by the time I came across this, your other optional story post had been taken down. Don't think they like those kind of challenge things very much which is a pity - I think it's always good to cultivate new ideas for stories.

I love the way this story is progressing, and the bit about her not being completely sure if she was with Fred as well as George was really cute. Liked the reaction of the Gryffindor boys, and I liked the fact that Draco is willing to take risks to be with her. So, good job. On another note, I had spent about an hour detailing my reaction to all six scenes in Delectus, hit send and everything disappeared! So, since I don't know how else to get in touch with you, in shorthand, go with # 6 (the new wand) incorporate the OMG! HAWT contraceptive charm casting scene somewhere, someplace, (even if you can't fit it in, here) and I liked the recommendation from another reviewer to make #6 include Veela or Marriage Law. #1 was a bit too overthetop, #2's Draco was a bit too mean, #3 was cute but felt complete as it was, #4 was mentioned above, and #5 didn't really grab me. #6 has a nice mix of good characterization and intrigue, so, that's the one I'd like to see more of.

As to the current fic, I want a lot more of that. At every opportunity.

i'm glad i've found such a great read. keep it up, hope you can shorten the wait for us soon...;)

I love your story and would be very happy if you sent me an e-mail when you updated.

forsaken_wolf_20@hotmail.com

Oh hello Monddame!

Long time no see, ha?

I'm just SO in the chatty mood, because I just re-read the whole story, to catch up with the update.

First what's first:
やったー！(Yatta!)
　(^o^)/
I got another special mention on ch. 4! -thank you so much!- You're adorable too!
*hugs*
and yes... As I see it the audience here has made IT clear: We're all in favour for the mailing list!
(but I was wondering... it would be a kind of useful suggestion for the webmaster of this site, right? see if he/ she could consider to implement this little request... ANYBODY knows where or to whom address for this affairs?)
ejem... back to the mailing list, yes, sign me up please! (anwarhadi86 at hotmail dot com)

About the chocolates: are you sure darling? *pokes Monddame on the ribs slightly* just a tiny box for all of us?!? (hehe... nevermind!. Imagine If you were about to start a business with such an amount of free samples engaged already... *tsk tsk* you'd be broke faster than you can say "Snitch")
if you don't mind, sing me up for the chocolate treat list too!
*winks*

And since we're on the "Wishes List" topic: Can I borrow your Draco for a little while? Reading back, I found myself thinking, I DO wanna wake up with a breakfast tray (not to mention Draco) -like Hermione did on ch. 2- on my birthday! Pleaaase???

Ok. Now seriously, the last chapters: loved them. Hehe... particularly cunning duo: Blaise && Theo!
I beat it's Pansy's dirty flashes we're getting from, right?... (not Astoria! oh for a change, I'd like her to become friends with Herms! I'm such a cheerful, idealistic and ultimately hopeless romantic!... but I'm not by any means trying to impose my wishes to your muse... no! never!)

Did I read correctly?
"and he wanted to be able to

Detention with Snapey! Drools! *cough* I mean, how terrible. All those subtle comments and innuendo going on - how awful! (yeah right). LOL And what a consolation prize to come back to her room to see a casually dressed Mafloy for one's viewing pleasure. LOL How typically, cunningly (is that a word?) Slytherin of him to ask her to be his dance partner without making it sound like he was actually asking her for a date (which he so was). :) Lion season is definitely over. LMAO But I love how mature his thoughts were as to think he'd have to make more of an effort to be civil to her friends and that he thought, if given the chance, that his friends would like Hermione too. Still worried about this chickie you talk about at the end though, she's even making Bellatrix look sane.

And I'm pleased you're enjoying my reviews as much as I am enjoying your story. :)

I love how much Draco is thinking through his relationship with Hermione. Oh, I hope they manage to go to the Halloween Ball together. What is sexy Snape up to? Sexual innuendo? I'd be dreaming of a Slytherin sandwitch after that (sp error intended).

Loved the fifth chapter. I don't remember if I made my suspicions known about the identity of the anonymous fellator, but I think she's in Slytherin House. My email's kazfeist at gmail dot com, if you're so inclined. Wondering why Draco hasn't figured out the ramifications of his plans yet, either. He's usually so clever about these things. :D

Oh wow I love this story. I knew I loved it after chapter two and I havent been able to stop reading it. I love how Draco is such a sweetie, there needs to be more teenage boys like that. haha. I would love to be on your email list for updates if you are going to do it. My email is tonda.maurer@yahoo.com