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for In Need of a Little Comfort

by Monddame

schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I honestly thought I had reviewed more than I had. I apologize. This story is fantastic and I eagerly await each update. This chapter was sweetly painful. Yes, the sex was angst-driven, but the honest need and acceptance were beautiful. Poor Hermione... so lost and confused. Poor Draco... so confused and in love. Poor Harry... just confused. lol I hope he decides to decide for himself. And, I hope Pansy's machinations don't get too much in the way. Next, I hope Draco finds a way to get on the good side before it's too late to choose for himself. Fourth, I hope you forgive my lack of reviews, as I promise to do better. Last, I hope you update again really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
who is that little tart at the end....and wait, it can't be Draco..he has grey eyes...WTF??? I'm SO CONFUSED.
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful yet again! I really like how you're progressing their relationship slowly. It finally seems to be comming to some sort of head with Draco falling in love with Hermione. Though I do forsee some problems with Hermione coming to terms with HER feelings for him. Indeed, it could be a question of: Harry or Draco? And is it Pansy and RON making eyes at eachother in the last paragrapghs!? RON??? The 'Lanky, blue eyed Gryffindor' stuff has me thinking!!!! And Pansy's started to blush! HA! That's what you get for using people! (assuming it's Pansy, that is.) Anyway, please please please update soon :D:D:D
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was simply hot and breathtaking.
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Reminder to self: Get a mirror.
Thats so sad about Harry though. I mean, I understand that he just needs "time" I would expect him to not be able to accept it right away. But that was so sad about her just curling into a ball and crying for who knows how long. At least Draco was there to save the day.
Keep up the good work, hun. Even if it takes you a bit of time to spit out a chapter, I love reading them.
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely chapter in so many ways....the juxtaposition of what the other perceives versus what is happening is quite nicely written. OOOOOO, that ending.....so intriguing.
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice really nice i can't wait to see what happens next. Though is the third narr. Pansy? I think it is. and can i have an update too? avalonhighgirl@yahoo.com Thanks. And can't wait for the next update. I liked the scene where Draco was like at the boys in his mind back the f**K off she's mine MINE!! All mine lol
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH I CAN'T BELEIVE I HAVN'T REVIEWED THIS YET! sorry sorry sorry, I just went and read through your reviews to see what I had written to you previously and 'lo and behold, no reviews yet! I have been voraciously reading this from the very begining and I have no idea why I havn't been review. I also really enjoyed the lenght of this chapter! And the idea of the chocolates is just so sinfully delicious, no pun intended lol I absolutely adore your writting and the imagery it provides. It makes me real real jealous. And for the life of me I still can't figure out who the last several paragraphs of each chapter are about!! Pansy perhaps?? Draco is just so cute and caring in this fic, while still retaining much of his canon self. LOVE IT. PLEASE UPDATE. (peferrably much faster then i do) :P
person katiekrm
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I was thinking the vengeful girl was Pansy, but now I'm thinking it's one of the other girls Draco has slept with. Maybe Cho? What on earth is she going to do to poor Ron? I'm interested to see what Harry says to Hermione. I love that George was the one Hermione lost her virginity to, but that was kind of sleazy to pull the old switheroo. She should have offered him up to a smitten girl and given her some polyjuice as revenge. Draco is being super sweet. I can't wait to see how the dance goes.
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigue very intrigue... who this third person might be? HUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! Let wait to the next I suppose...