AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for In Need of a Little Comfort

by Monddame

person Anon
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I had to laugh when Ron thought it was all about him (and who is it that he likes???) (oh is it our mysterious witch that we only know the thoughts of so far or am I looking at the obvious????) LOL But he certainly turned about quickly enough once he knew about Draco - although Hermione didn't exactly break it to him gently (not sure that she could). And Damn, I think I'd be quite happy to let Draco comfort me any time. :)

In all likelyhood there's nothing at all off about your story, people just get busy from time to time. I know Down Under a lot of people will be getting ready for final exams so maybe it's the same waaaaayyyyyyyyy up North too. :) I certainly hope you're not going to stop writing.
person jillianpuzzlebox
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

1) Draco did promise not to hex, but he iddn't promise not to beat up, somethin to think about
2) ron is such a hypocrite. he's "with" pansy and he's mad at hermione for hooking up with draco? what a pig
3) hermione needs to make a stand and inform harry and ron (after a good stupefy) that they're not the boss of her and that if they cannot support her, like she's always supporting them, then maybe they're not good friends and maybe she should get new ones? just a thought, i mea, with friends like that....

thanks for posting
jillian
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a very very very good chapter. You really have a way with words! This writting style is impecable. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Ron reacts. But if my suspicions are correct and he's also been having rendevous with Pansy, I'm sure he won't say much :P Be sure to update soon! I can't wait to see what happens. Oh! and I also LOVED the steamy beginning with the way Draco wakes her up. That's definately one of my favorite ways to be woken up....
person Kayrox133
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story and look forward to the next few chapters. Very hot
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I think your portrayal of Draco and Hermione is spot on and their relationship is amazing. I hope Ginny gets Harry to open his eyes, though i think Hermione may have some trouble with Ron!
On an additional note i met Alan Rickman at the Half Blood Prince premiere in London! My friends obsessed with him and got her picture taken with him and his autograph!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are keeping me very intrigue on who is this third person at the end of every chapter.. Fun Fun Fun ... More please!
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Always love it when Ginny is onside. :) Her token sister. And while I'm mad at Harry I do sort of understand where he's coming from too. I hope he (and Ron too once he finds out) calms down and tries to accept things a little better. He should realise that no-one chooses who they feel attracted to or care for and Hermione should know he's had quite the shock, too. Still, I hold my breath (figuratively speaking) until it gets sorted out. But as for this mysterious witch - I've gone from disliking ehr to feeling quite sorry for her and am wondering what was so terrible in her past to make her like she is. Love the intrigue of the backstory. :)

As for that wake up call, my mantra is a waste of time - I am, once again, jealous of a fictional character. LOL
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story very much! Its the Draco I always wanted to read about, not concerned with different houses and feeling the freedom to fall in love with whoever he wanted to. You did a great job at sucking me into the plot and leaving me hanging (why oh why did you leave me at your mercy! :D). Thanks for the heart warming scenes and the giddy smiles. This is a story i could read over and over again.
Ariel
person jillianspuzzlebox
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

It's been awhile since my last review, please forgive me. I do hope Draco knocks some sense into Harry. It's unfair of him to dictate whom other people can love when he has who he wants. Moreover, Hermione has always been faithful to him and this is her reward? Perhaps Hermione should explain the truth serum and Draco could offer to repeat the process for Harry, with pre-approved questions? Also, Draco has made efforts towards her friends, will Hermione be required to do the same?

Thanks for sharing with us,
Jillian
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG lol
Harry was being mean to Hermione wasn't he. I wonder what the relationship between the two of them is going to be like from now on. And that's no fair that Hermione gets to jump Draco when she feels bad. Can i have him? pretty please? I'll trade you him for let's say a bag of the lindt chocolates and a hot fudge sundae with a cherry on top with sprinkles. =) Can't wait for your next update. =)