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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I've reviewed before, but I love this story! Your Draco and Hermione are perfect and very hot together. Can't wait for more. ;)
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if I'm a lurker, but I somehow missed many chapters of the story... I adore this story & I think the Harry/Ron reactions were great - even if I want to smack both of their selfish faces!!! I have had two guesses as far as the silent plotter... I'm now leaning towards the girl Draco thought would get along w/ Hermione. I'm probably wrong, but I want to know soon!!!
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Sorry for not reviewing. Usually I'm better about doing so. As a writer, I totally eat up reviews. I find that they tend to tapper off in the middle unless there's like a cliffhanger or if you have something that brings them reviewing, like a game. I have the Review Sing-A-Long at the end of most chapters. True, not as many people respond to it as I like, but a few times I was able to get readers that had never reviewed before writing in. Reviews are a drug and I like the buzz. And apparently so do you.
As for the story itself, well, in the last two chapters you've had Hermione being rather weepy. But then in the books she was prone to doing that, wasn't she? It was one of the few pet peeves I had about her when I was reading the books. Oh well. Other than that your writing is great and the plot though not unique is well done. Keep up the good work and I hope this review bolsters your spirits.
As for the story itself, well, in the last two chapters you've had Hermione being rather weepy. But then in the books she was prone to doing that, wasn't she? It was one of the few pet peeves I had about her when I was reading the books. Oh well. Other than that your writing is great and the plot though not unique is well done. Keep up the good work and I hope this review bolsters your spirits.
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story, thank goodness I'm on the mailing list because otherwise I'm not sure I would remember what chapter I'm on. I read so many of these stories.. but this one is definitely in my top favorites. Ron is such a jerk but I can imagine him telling her that he just didn't really want her because he had someone else. At least she has that wonderful man Draco. He's a real sweetheart, comforting her in the tub and holding her while she cried. Of course.. his own form of comfort is awesome too. :D
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really do not know what could be the problem with the people that love to read but do not review, hey I bet you got a lot of hits on it to. Hey I keep loving it! More please
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am loving the story. I have to say that it is one of the first ones I look for to see if there has been an update! Please keep writing
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* another awesome chapter! :D
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi:
I'm enjoying your storya lot, and the development of the plot and characters is really good, please keep going and post the next chapter soon!
A hug
Lisi
I'm enjoying your storya lot, and the development of the plot and characters is really good, please keep going and post the next chapter soon!
A hug
Lisi
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! (of course I just FOUND the story :P) I really want to know what everyone's costumes are!
I think it's the fact that Harry seems a bit OOC. He usually is hot headed, but comes around rather quickly.
Whatever! Keep writing!
-SI
I think it's the fact that Harry seems a bit OOC. He usually is hot headed, but comes around rather quickly.
Whatever! Keep writing!
-SI
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You were right about indifference breeding apathy breeding inaction, but that's not the case here. I'm still loving it! I can't wait to see who the girl is who keeps dallying with Ron. I think once Draco decides to fight on the "right" side of the war, which I am assuming he eventually will, the boys will be a lot calmer about his relationship with Hermione. I'm looking forward to the dance!