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by Roedhunt

schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooo! wasn't he supposed to come 5 times each session??!! theres 4 more to go!!!
either way, that was hot as all hell! love how Snape is the biter, we all knew he was a vampire.
I don't get the ending though... Was Harry scared of the fact that he may love them? or was he just trying to make them mad so that they would punish him later? and if he WAS trying to make them mad, why did they look sad when he said he didn't love them?
anyhooooo, thats just me and my slow little brain. awesome fic either way and i would loooooooove a sequel!!!
person Karin
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well normally I hate slave fics, but I'm going to say that I DEFINITELY enjoyed yours. I hope you write a sequel because I really would like to see Harry maybe come to love them for real, but only after he has the freedom to choose it and not have it beaten into him. Not that you should ever be constrained by what I want. half the joy in reading is seeing something you never imagined.
Karin
person Kat1132
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know that it says that you've completed this, but I'd really love to see what happens next. You left us hungering for more, and yet I really want to know what Harry's future will be. Will his owners try to make him love them? I'd love to know! I can't wait to read some of your other works. Fabulous job.
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, that was hot... What Draco did to his cock *moans*... but the end, hmm, I'm not sure what to make of it. I kinda think he would get majorly punished for saying that, but, hmmm..

Oh, and did I mention the spikes on Lucius's cock... brilliant