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for Predicting the Future Brightness

by margaritama

person Trelweny
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I personally thought it was a wonderful use of the prompts. All the astronomy information was really fun to read in conversation, instead of the usual non-fiction sources. ;)

Personally I've always liked Scorpius. Don't understand what Hermione's issue with the name was. Don't understand how she was convinced to use it either.

Thanks so much for writing!
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've loved reading this and could go on to read more.
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! anoter bloody brilliant story written by you. I love how you went with the challange and did an AWESOME job!! It was a great way for those two to get together and I cannot believe that she let draco name their son Scorpius.
Once again, GREAT JOB!!!
person Robs
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another fabulous one-shot from you! Written from a brilliant prompt too. I love the astronomy link. Keep up the good work!
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think there is anything on the planet that could make me like the name Scorpius, but at least you gave me lovely story to go with it. lol I really admire those of you who can take a challenge and run with it, as I get too stymied to complete one. lol And, I applaud your story!! That was simply scrumptious! Thank you, hon! HG4eva
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job, as always, and I salute you for your information. Definitely added to the story since our Hermione would of course know everything about it. No Ogden's Old in this one, eh? Oh well, maybe next time ;)

Yours,
Ryn
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for you to actually make your appearance again...lol. I love your stories and oneshots. I always look forward to reading your creative writing. Seriously. You are one heck of a good writer. Keep it up. Aw. It was great, short one shot. I loved it. I hope your next oneshot or fic is about a dark, sexy, dominante, posessive draco Malfoy and or intellegent, petite, war heroine, Hermione Granger. Great job!

LS
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That really touched me. It's amazing what you can do in so few words. It's really a talent. I really liked this a lot. Loved Pansy's plotting behind the scenes, and how quickly they came together and how quickly it heated up because of their longing. Just wonderful and so romantically hot. Great job as usual.

My favorite line: They lay side by side in silence before she added with a sigh,
person smmz79
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aahhh what a great one shot... i laughed when their son was named scorpius that was funny.... but if course draco knew he would get what he wanted... i liked how he referenced hermione as his sun and him as a comet theat burns brighter when close to her...
person mhaj78
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So beautiful and sweet! I don't know why, but the ending actually made me shiver! lovely ;)