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for Just Like Jesse James

by megadeth425

person Peasoup3
schedule August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I believe this has the potential to become very yummy. Much like the succubus. an awesome smutty charter develop romance between Hermione and Snape. It's a long read but a guaranteed drool maker. here's the link ---->
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/user.php?sid=8457&logintext=This%20story%20contains%20adult%20content%20and/or%20themes.%20Please%20log%20in%20or%20register%20to%20access%20it.&intent=read
person carl
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Harry is being a total jerk to Hermione - what a fool he is!
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic.
person Jay
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Luna's character slightly reminds me of Nabokov's Lolita. Was it intended or did it just come out that way?
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, embarrassing title or no, this is off to a great start. I was surprised at first how you aged Harry over Luna, but I see by the challenge how you are posing this scenario and I like it.

I'm a sucker for any Harry/Luna, but this holds great promise. Looking forward to their meeting in school.