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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I'm really intrigued...looking forward to you developing their relationship!
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story...I hope you keep adding to it xx
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione, I am crying for her. No doubt Sirius will be a better man for her than Harry, but she doesn't know that yet and she has lost so much. It is not only that Harry has moved on, after all that time he migth be allowed to, but married after a year and a half? If one assume that there has been some dating and planning before their wedding day, Harry didn't even wait a year befor he moved on. That makes him a major prat even if I don't want Hermione to end up with him anyway...:-))
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has me crying my eyes out. I can't believe Harry got married just a year and a half after she was taken. That's completely messed up. At first I wondered why this was under Hermione/Sirius when she should be with Harry; I see where you're going with Sirius now. This very good.
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, this sounds like it will be very intense! I can't wait for more, please update soon.
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice start so far. You've set it up with some good suspense: What happened to her? What's happened in the intervening years? The thing with the watch/time is an interesting way of focusing us on Hermione's 'brokenness' ... she's still herself, in there somewhere, needing to focus on details, but not having the facts at her disposal, she's focusing on the only clear information she has in front of her ... what's on the watch.
Looking forward to wherever you're going to take this.
Looking forward to wherever you're going to take this.
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It well written and interesting in the fact that she started out with Harry and is slowly inching towards Sirius. Am I wrong or did I detect a bit of "Kiss the Girls" in there? More specifically the way she was found. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story so far! I also like how the chapters are short, but hold a lot of information. It makes for an enjoyable read. You have talent; keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more chapters :)
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.