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for Broken

by lilmisblack

schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Took me a while to really get into the story, but now I want to see where it's going. I hope you keep updating.
person Anonymous2004
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is LITERALLY the first story I have read on this site which is actually really good! Please keep writing, I am all agog to see what develops!
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so hauntingly beautiful that I had to reread it today. I am looking forward to your next update and I hope it will be soon.
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really liking this stry. Please, please, please update soon!
person Jammar
schedule October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I don't often review stories but this one is just so amazing and eemotional and OMG I don't even know how to describe it properly to do it justice! Please please please hurry and update soon!!!!
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for another brilliant update. This is such an emotional story, you never fail to bring tears to my eyes. At the same time I sense the glimmer of hope that Hermione will be able to go on, to find some happiness one day in the future (said happiness will of course be connected to Sirius:-)). She was way to nice to Harry though, how dare he claim that he has in any way suffered? Oh, I don't doubt that he was upset and hurt when she was taken, but to say that he has suffered in Hermiones company is more than bad taste, it is a total lack of manners, emphathy and any inkling to what real suffering is. And then to send his wife to treat her? I can see that he thougth it a good idea for Hermione to be treated by a friend, but to throw a wife in her face? A proof on that he not only quickly moved on, but that he gave up on her? That the lifeline that she klung to, the hope that Harry would save her, never existed at all? Nope, roasting above an open fire would be to kind of punishment for him.
I am as usual very much looking forward to read more!
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
person apkblack
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing really takes me in, feeling what she's feeling, just so powerfully done. Thank you so much for the update.

Am appreciating now the brief glimpses into where she might have been for those years, and what she might have been put through, without having graphic details. Very well done.

Hoping more comes soon.