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for Savage Seduction

by mad4moony

schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Hermione crawled up to him and rested her chin in the crook of his neck, placing her arm over his waist and letting her hand droop against his stomach. He didn
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM








schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one to see what happens.
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well I love the start so far. I'm glad that I found this story
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love this story. though it was silly of hermione to go to her parents house if she thought it was fenrir...he could've followed her lol
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow I Loved that part.......great job
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL loved that little burst from Mione. her punching and kicking him..it was sad though
person jude25
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there sweetie....my very sincere apologies for not reviewing again sooner; things have been insanely crazy recently. And thank you so much for the emails regarding updates..you're a gem.
I am really enjoying your vision for this story unfold, and am very much looking forward to how the relationship between our protagonists will play out.
I'm not much for throwing my own ideas out there, in regards to how I'd like to see the story shape up. After all, it is YOUR story, your vision, and so far, I have enjoyed every moment of the journey you are letting us experience through your work. And I must say, you are fiendishly good at over coming this writer's block that you are sometimes afflicted with;).
I love your portrayal of Fenrir. You've managed to present him in all his beastly glory, while at the same time revealing the many other depths and nuances of his character quite brilliantly. That is a huge bonus to the story (though I do try to imagine him without those dreaded plaits in his beard...gives me the hibbies)!
So, my darling author, don't be afraid to let your muse continue take you wherever he or she dains to with this story. And I can't wait for another update:) Thanks again Laura!
Sincerely,
Jude.
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! The chemistry b/w Fenrir and Hermione blows me away! It's quite rare to come across this pairing let alone have justice done to the 'ship'. Please continue as I am interested in seeing where this all goes! Also, I can say that there appears to be just the right amount of 'conflict' b/w the two, however I would like to see Hermione 'work for it', and perhaps 'compete' w/ another (although Fenrir cares for none other than Hermione... of course). G'luck w/ it all and well done thus far! XD