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You are evil, just plain evil:-)) Stopping the scene rigth there and then tell us you won't write the rest? I admit to have no problem imagine the rest, but there is something about seeing it in writing. Excellently written as usual, and I am looking forward to read more!

it was worth the wait. I kept on checking to see if you wrote more and was so glad when you wrote more!
This chapter was amusing. I loved the begining of it when he was chasing his prey and she was scared. But I also love how they were while laughing. It was cute.

The sex part was hot. very hot. And I can't wait for more. Please please please update soon

What could she expect? She hardly expected the werewolf to say,

Great update, I am very much looking forward for the next one. I will hold you to your promise of never using "Fenny" again though (or "Mione"), big hunks of werewolfs does not suit the name "Fenny":-)

Great chapter! He actually said 'sorry' - obviously he's part beast, because I believe human men are incapable of saying sorry at the right time! She was being so grouchy & now they're laughing & playing in the surf. Are they going to have some 'sand in yucky places' beach sex? As long as I just hopes she keeps bing happy & stops being such a grouch! I kind of feel sorry for Fenrir - even though he kidnapped her (minor detail there). Can't wait for more :)

A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.

I have to say, this is the first time I've taken time to review anything. I have to give you credit. I stumbled upon this story by accident a week or two ago, and I'm absolutely hooked. I'm mostly a Remus fan, and really I've never given Greyback much of a second thought. He was just kind of that necessary evil that was part of Remus's past(if you have the time I recommend reading "Shades" by FernWithy. Its got a lot of good bits about werewolves and I really liked her portrayal of Fenrir.)I love your portrayal of him so far, his cockyness, but also what lies beneath and his sense of humor. The cute bits are cute, without being cavity-inducing. The sexy bits are...well sexy. Mrow. Its refreshing after reading countless hours worth of fic involving heaps and heaps of ANGSTY stuff.
Basically I'm writing this little review to let you know you've made me a Fenrir fangirl. You've inspired me to try to tackle my own little fic, in which the role of a certain werewolf keeps expanding under your bad bad influence. ;) However your portrayal of him is much more believeable I think.
I have to admit I laughed out loud when Hermione called him "Fenny", simply because I knew it would irk him so. I think its funny for her to use it as a dig against him now and then. Perhaps he could come up with an embaressing nickname for her? (Besides Mione...ugh.)
Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm enjoying every minute.

Too much lemons/Too little lemons/ Right amount of lemons? I think its fine. I wouldn't mind a little more especially seeing as she has her period and shes all bloody plus has sperm all over her. You should've have him eat her out after or something LOL....but its okay. I also love how they cuddle afterwards. its cute

Too much Angst (From which side)/ Too little? No its not too much. I like how they have their spats. He gets angry. She does. He grabs her tightly or something or growels and she hits him to death lmfao. its great.

Too much humour not enough Seriousness? Yes/No? Naw its perfect. I like the humor. You can tell they are falling for each other.

Too much stalling with relationship, make something happen already? No its not stalling..I mean she has not been kidnapped for that long. She is not terrified of him anymore. Still a little scared but you can tell she is starting to care for him. I don't think your stallling at all. I mean Fenrir is a werewolf..he is trying his hardest to not scare or hurt her. YOu can't expect a werewolf whom has been a monster for his whole life to just get with a girl and treat her good like an angel. So its perfect. your doing a great job



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Sorry I haven't reviewed yet! I just started reading & went the whole way through. I'm loving this story! Here are my opinions on your questions - For me, there's the right amount of lemons. I like that you had Hermione storm away at the end of this chapter - she was too mad to put up with his constant need for sex. (silly girl) Maybe there's a little too much angst w/ Hermione, but she wouldn't be herself if she wasn't angsting and over-thinking every word spoken & every action. I like the mix of humor & seriousness. I'm not a patient person, so I wish something would happen already! I do understand building the tension and all that - I just have trouble w/ delayed gratification :) Is Fenrir turning out to be sexy and beastly enough? :D Do you have to ask that question??? Well, he seems like a sex god to me - yum! *winks*