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another great chapter, i do believe that it was worth waiting for, but please really...update a little sooner..plz...

So It's taken me 4 or so days but I read through all 13 chapters. First I want to say I've really enjoyed the story. I normally only enjoy reading one shots. But I started this one and even though there wasn't anything for two chapters I really enjoyed your writing style and so stuck with it.

I came for the rape and stayed for the plot. I've been hoping for that meaner side of Fenrir to come out more. But that's just me, haha. I have been wondering about what's going on with the fact she's been missing about a month now and we haven't gotten a hint about what everyone else is doing. But I'm sure you're building up to it.

But I must say that The part where Fenrir felt bad and apologized to her was really amazing. I had some tears well up in my eyes cause I could easily imagine the hurt he felt.

Thank you so much for doing this wonderful piece. I've had very little else but your story on my mind the past several days. I look forward to reading more.

Signed 'A captivated fan'
Little Odessa

this was a great chapter hun.... it was interesting and explained some of the questions that were in my head.
Very good

Evil, pure evil! Not seeing Fenrir for a while? Why? If she goes back to ickle Ronnikins I swear I will stop reading for a while:-)) (I am sooooo allergic to that idea of Hermione and Ron together)Though, I guess for progress sake that she will have to get back to let everyone know she is alive etc, not to mention find foundation for her and Fenrir to spend the rest of their life together (for they will be together?????????). My compliments of the background you have made for Fenrir, that was very well done and very interesting reading, I really liked that. I also liked Fenrirs description of werewolfes, again an excellent job. I am very much looking forward to read more (even if I have to close my eyes to avoid any Ron-interaction:-)).

An excellent chapter. I can't wait to read more to see what happens.

After she had pulled away she frowned looking him up and down, dried blood caked his chest and neck. He was filthy.

This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

I was so happy to see the next chapter! It wasn't that long of a wait, I'm just impatient! Yummy ending there *winks*

I thought I sent you a review. I'm pretty sure I did grr but I left the pc for hours and now I'm back and the review thing is up and blank
*shrugs*

anyway I loved this chapter. It was amusing and cute in the begining and then hot at the end. cant wait for more