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Wonderful chapter. Thanks for coming back to finish it up.

Love Sonia :)

I love this story...please don't stop writing it or please write another Fenrir and Hermione story!

I absolutely love what you've done w/ the pair! I'm sure you've heard this before but I can't help but note this: Best HG/FG fanfic I've ever had the pleasure of reading, and in saying as much I would dearly love to see more, of this quality! As for Hermione and her character throughout the story, before and after the edit: I like the feeling of being left, awash with confusion! Hermione is indecisive, often uncertain, bordering on displaying manic behavior, and I find that these traits for this particular story are perfect, and helped fuel Fenrir's own frustration. Fenrir's character I found steadfast throughout! Well grounded, consistent, but for his own trepidation when concerning Hermione and his 'feelings'. In short: thumbs up! (I'm extremely glad that nothing happened b/w Ron and Hermione... I can't help but vomit a lil' when thinking of that particular 'ship) As for what will occur when Hermione bares witness to Fenrir when transformed: this is tricky. There are so many options. Maul her to death, then kill himself? No, that's horrid. Perhaps, something much more sensual? I'll leave that up to your imagination. XD I hope to see more chapters when you can upload them! No pressure, I'm just hungry for more, and the inevitable culmination of the story!

i love the house elf part!! and i hope that the wolf will know who hermionie is!! thanks for the chapter!!:D

Why is Hermione so mean. It's like one minute she recalls the rape, and the fact that Greyback is a cold blooded killer. Then the next she can't stop feeling that she's in love with him. Is it the "Stockholmes syndrome" or was there some kind of reaction to him when he raped her that even though it was rape she became his mate like some kind of werewolf curse thing.

I've just sat and read the whole story. I'm now waiting for more! I crave it. It's perfect.
I love your take on Fenrir. I've found it hard to find a Hermione/Fenrir as fabulous as this. Good job ;D
Please don't keep us waiting!

i love this story its awesome.. makes me wants to read it one sitting.. i'm panting with anticipation.. i love it.. keep up the great work. and don't let anyone tell you different.

yay a new chapter!!!!! very well done. It upset me how mean molly could be to hermione...but then again I wouldn't have put it past her. I hope this story still has many more chapters before its finished because I love love LOVE it lol. can't wait for the next chapter and hope that its soon!!! and with lemons lol keep up the good work!

i love the howl part!! it was a funny chapter.. but, i thought ron was only a fiance..? thanks!!!

You made me suddenly become a Hermione/Fenrir shipper:) Love your story!!! Especially Fenrir. Emotions, the howls, everything...beautiful.
As the previous review mentioned though, what's up with the "married woman" and "divorce papers" stuff? She was engaged, but after she came back it wasn't even that...
(*feeling shame for daring to question the author...but*) The last bit with Ron felt kind of wrong and not very organic. I don't know how to describe this really, but the last part just seemed so out of character for the Hermione you've created. You know the quote: "the opposite of love is not hate, but indifference"? The way Hermione behaved was kind of low and spiteful. That was the first time in the story where I was actually team "Ron" instead of "Hermione/Fenrir" (disgusting feeling:). I was really looking forward for H and F to find each other again and the way you reunited them was fantastic (you called...I came...mmmm!!!!), just loved it! BUT, then the last bit with Ron just spoiled the great reunion scene a little:( That's why I am a bit upset I guess.

right, enough rambling.
LOVE YOUR STORY. PLEASE POST MORE!!!