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December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story and can't wait for the next installment. Please keep up the good work. I'll be watching for the next chapter eagerly.
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More More More... She is getting better by the chapter I meant Hermione.. LOL
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please do update.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just want to say I find this story really interesting so far. I understand from your profile that you are possibly not a native english speaker (sorry if I'm wrong), and just wanted to suggest that it'd be a good idea to get a beta to look over the story. The wording and grammer make it a bit of a challenge to read, and some people might get turned off of reading it completely because of that. Not trying to be rude or anything of that sort, I just think it would make the story easier to read and more appealing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I just started reading this and unless it is heavily edited by a good Beta, I don't think I will be able to continue. There are so many grammar, spelling and word usage errors that I cannot find a good pace when reading your story. It is annoying to have to stop reading when an incorrect word is used in order to think about the proper word that should have been used and then start up reading again only to stop after three more words to repeat the decoding process. The plot and story themselves are good but not good enough to overcome the flaws in editing. It is hard to write a story and then share it with complete strangers and I admire you for posting here and putting yourself on the chopping block. Some people are dishonest or mean when giving a review, and that's terrible. My intention is not to be rude, but to give an honest opinion so that your stories can be awesome, because this one has the potential. Good luck with your stories and do think about posting a request for a beta.
Thanks again for sharing,
Jillian
I just started reading this and unless it is heavily edited by a good Beta, I don't think I will be able to continue. There are so many grammar, spelling and word usage errors that I cannot find a good pace when reading your story. It is annoying to have to stop reading when an incorrect word is used in order to think about the proper word that should have been used and then start up reading again only to stop after three more words to repeat the decoding process. The plot and story themselves are good but not good enough to overcome the flaws in editing. It is hard to write a story and then share it with complete strangers and I admire you for posting here and putting yourself on the chopping block. Some people are dishonest or mean when giving a review, and that's terrible. My intention is not to be rude, but to give an honest opinion so that your stories can be awesome, because this one has the potential. Good luck with your stories and do think about posting a request for a beta.
Thanks again for sharing,
Jillian
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August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why didn't you file this in the draco/hermione section. You'd probably get more readers that way.
a question... Did Hermione write in her journal about the rape? that wasn't very clear.
a question... Did Hermione write in her journal about the rape? that wasn't very clear.
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start. You have set this up really well. I hope you plan to continue it!