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I have a FAR better way for them to get rid of the Dursley's than what they've been planning. The Ministry would, at worst, throw them in Azkaban for the rest of their lives, torture, but not as satisfying as their plans. If Moony, Padfoot and Snape had their way, THEY'D be thrown in Azkaban for the rest of their lives. BUT with my plan, the Dursley's end up dead or insane, and they'd have a chance to end the war. My plan: use Sev's position as a Death Eater spy to lure Voldemort to 4 Privet Drive claiming that Harry would be there until September 1, but the blood wards would fall on July 31. That would allow Voldemort a chance to face Harry again. But Harry would have left, leaving the Dursley's vulnerable to the Death Eaters. Once the Death Eaters are through with the Dursley's, the Order attacks them, and voila! Vengeance against the Dursley's AND a chance to end the war in one stroke. BTW, I thought Harry had threatened the Dursley's with vengeance from Sirius after Third Year, how is it that the walrus was willing to beat him up?

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS STORY!!!!!!! I love the story so far, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. The suspense is really starting to get to me!

this is a brilliant story

want more i hope that harry gets his happiness and severus and sirius

want more please update soon

i had to re read this story want more

i hope the dursley die painfully and i hope that harry's family get to help

This definitely an interesting fic. I was captivated by the memories Harry showed the others of his past. I could see the Dursley's easily doing something like that. Completely spell-bound and full of dread at the idea that the memories were going to get worse at things went. I even smiled a bit at the idea of Cedric and Harry being pregnant at the same time. It was very enjoyable and I had almost hoped it'd be more of a humourous fic but am not disappointed in the least that this is angst ridden. I did however find it difficult to read at times not because of one or two typos but just the sheer repetitiveness. Like for example when any one characther said something for a long time you continue on their tangent by seperating with 'continued, finally, concluded' to the point that I was yanking out my hair. I'd sort of wish you'd just put the whole conversation in one or two paragraphs instead of disecting them so finally. I guess I'd have gotten over it but when you do it for each conversation that goes on for more than three sentences than it gets a bit irritating. Same with everyones view of the memories. Cedric's memory of the memory should be sufficient enough but you end up showing Snape and Black's going through the motions although the description of the events are slightly miniumum. I guess it's okay but when it's done every single time and you know what's coming each and every time it sort of seems tiring. Otherwise this was a nice fic you had started. Too bad when I started reading this yesterday you hadn't offically gotten to the point where they were pregnant. That definitely be amusing seeing what odd cravings they might have and who may be taking care of the two when they get further into pregnancy. Most likely Cedric's parents. =3

the comedy relief dose help get through the horror of the memories. i am o glad you didn't ditch this story.

i love it happy that you updted it want more