rate_review Reviews

wow! keep goin! i liked it! i cant w8 2 read the nxt chap!

Is this going to continue?? I very much enjoyed it.

I liked it at the bigenning but then the part with Harry's memos had too much angst and was much too long

I'm confused about something that seems to be implied in chapter 10. Is Draco some kind of magical creature who recently awoke to his inheritance, and his creature side chose Harry as his mate even before the law was made? *lol* Why else would he supposedly 'go insane' if he HAD gotten Harry to marry him, and Harry had spited him by turning himself over to Voldemort rather than be Draco's spouse, like Snape suggest Harry might have done if he had been forced to be Draco? Won't he still go insane, now that his mate is married in a unbreakable magical marriage to someone else?

this is well written, although the pensive sense are bit disturbing though i would like to know wat the Cedric's parents are thinking while veiwing them. other than that i wish for this to continue

I really love this story!! Hope that you do not give this one up!! Hope to see an update soon!!

In the latest chapter you use the word 'neutering' when you meant to say 'nurturing'. I think this many dark memories would have been fine except that you repeat each memory with each group that views it. I understand wanting to get the reaction of each person, but the constant reviewing of the memory is what gets tedious.

With that said I am enjoying the story, and do think JKR let the ball drop on the abuse by Dumbledore and the other professors never knowing what Harry went through each summer. And why did they never notice how much thinner he was when he came back to school?

I don't think I ever review this before but I am sick of the dark memories too. But if one of them includes Harry kicking ass with wandless magic than I want to see that!

Your story started really well, I was intrigued with the Cedric/Harry pairing, it's so seldomly done, however, how many chapters of abuse do you need? I think we all get that he was abused, I fail to see what continuing to descibe abuse is achieving except to lose you readers, This is only the second ever negative review I ahve givenin my 3 plus years of reviewing fanfic.

I just now started reading your fic and I must say I am very much enjoying it :) However it seems chapter 13 / your 8th update is gone so I cant read on :( I really hope it's just a glitch that I can't see it however Could you check? I would relly like to read more, but don't want to skip a chapter....