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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes you should its good so far.
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes, I think you should continue this story. I, for one, am intrigued and want to see where this litte story is going to go. Your writing style seems very easy and the characters that were already introduced seemed strong and very believable. Kudos!
I hope you decide to continue. I look forward to the next chapter!
Happy writing!
I hope you decide to continue. I look forward to the next chapter!
Happy writing!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh yes please do continue!
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice cant wait to see more