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Wow. Are you going to add to this? I would love to see what happens in the next detention, pretty please with reviews on top?

Let's hear it for potion induced, dubious consent teacher/student sex! Hooray! I'm not a Snape fan, but your title and summary caught my interest. This was very, very hot and I love how Snape used Amortentia in his seduction. I don't think the characters were OOC, at least not Hermione. Considering the potion was fogging up her thoughts, she still put up some resistance. Although not much as a)Snape is an authority figure and b)she was more considered with her Potions grade. If you do continue this story, I'm interested in what type of potion, drug, or spell Snape would use to get her the next time.

One thing I did notice was you had both characters talking within the same paragraph which was a little distracting. Writing rules usually say that a new paragraph begins when the speaker changes. Sorry!

I can't believe this is your first fic! Really, really enjoyed this and can't wait to read something of yours again. I'm always a fan of chocolate chip cookies, but I'd rather have more of the story. Especially, MrsDracoMalfoy, if your husband decides to join in. Draco would so use that Amortentia for his own purposes. ;)

That was hot. Wonder just how hot the next detention would be.
I cant believe that's your first though. Wow.

That was really good for your first story. I'd like to read more. Maybe you could tell us what happens at Hermione's next detention! Overall you should definitely continue writing - I know I'll read it.

Great first story, looking forward to reading more of your work in the furture.

I liked it!