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January 4, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Hot AF!!!!! Hope you plan to write more!!!!
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August 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM
HOTTTTT!!!!!
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October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i am not against cumming on the face etc but i have it on very good athority that(and before you say anything, this is not an old fashioned myth etc that) getting cum in the eyes can cause blindness!!! PS please add MORE to this story!!!!!! :-)
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was really great! Congratulations =]
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh such a great story! I wish you would write more to this... more chapters or a sequel. I'd love to see what detention is going to be like!
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is actually some really good smut lol. You should continue the story! :)
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can I just ditto the above review? I'll beg for more if you want. This was all kinds of hot. Love Dom!Snape and Innocent!Hermione. More, more, more! Even if it's not this story, I'd love to see others from you.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
why doesn't this have more reviews? this was really good and it should have hundreds of people begging for more! guess i'll have to beg for the masses. please, please, please write more! loved all of it. snape being angry and hermione a bad, naughty girl when she's done nothing. like creepy snape. also agree with the reviewer above. you left things open to interpretation (sp?). our hermione could be as old or as young as our deviant minds would like. best line: "Am I.... unh... a bad girl?" love how confused and naive she is, but worried about disappointed her professor.
please please please! more!
please please please! more!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was your first story? You kid! I want to say it was hot but that would be a gross understatement. This is hella hot! One of the things I really liked was your Snape. He seemed to be angry at his attraction to the girl, so he took it out on her. None of this protective, amorous Snape, but rather he is going to punish her for making him feel this way and get back some control. Good times. Also liked how ambiguous you made Hermione's age. It could take place in an AU 7th year or any time before. The Amortentia was a good idea too. With all the magical elements in the Harry Potter world, you don't see them used that often. Amortentia or Imperio or Love potion from WWW or tons of other stuff with wands. Magic!
I am really hoping you decide to continue this story. I am interested in detention #2. How else will Snape control and toy with Bad Little Miss Granger whose only sin seems to be tempting her potions professor.
I am really hoping you decide to continue this story. I am interested in detention #2. How else will Snape control and toy with Bad Little Miss Granger whose only sin seems to be tempting her potions professor.
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was great! Really enjoyed it... please add more! Would love to see what you come up with next.. maybe more spanking of a naughty miss granger?