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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(Post Ch. 10) This is pretty great stuff..you're really finding a stride here.
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August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Their dynamic is so strange and beautiful and bitter that I'm unsure where their relationship is headed. Their little question and answer exchange was interesting as well. We see them attempting to connect on a deeper level, but I'm unsure of they're making much progress. They (and by they, I mean you) have exquisite taste in literature and music!
Bea
Bea
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Well done. It is a joy to find such a well written and spirited Lucius fic! Love the scene with Lucius walking in on Ginny and Draco. It was... perfect!
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
god, you're a fantastic writer.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Nine: This was a very potent chapter, Alecto! I like the tension between Lucius and Ginny, the slight awkwardness and strain. Your prose is lyrical and bittersweet and emotive. Brava!
Bea
Bea
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I especially liked the tension at the beginning. The latest chapters can - for me personally - not totally live up to that, to the expectation that was built up with the first chapters. In the end, their sex looks pretty usual and the thrill of the forbidden is lost as well.
A little tip: dialogue would be easier to understand if the people acting in one paragraph were the same that speak.
E.g. you wrote [QUOTE]Ginny seemed to sense it and looked down at him, almost smiling.
A little tip: dialogue would be easier to understand if the people acting in one paragraph were the same that speak.
E.g. you wrote [QUOTE]Ginny seemed to sense it and looked down at him, almost smiling.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Perverts? Hardly. *sniffs* It seems I fell a bit behind in my reviewing. Unlike fanfiction.net, this website lacks a proper alert system. Anyway, I'm quite with the way things are progressing; there was so much tension building that it just had to spill over eventually. And spill over it did! Dear Lord, that was a vicious shag. Very sexy, though, and appropriate, considering their personalities and prejudices and proclivities. I'm curious as to how their relationship is going to progress.
Regards,
Bea
Regards,
Bea
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! this particular pervert is super happy!
damn, you are a fantastic author... i am so looking forward to more. :)
damn, you are a fantastic author... i am so looking forward to more. :)
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say that your style of writing is unlike any other that I have come across. I am IN LOVE with this story... and I love Puukko (sorry if the spelling is wrong) as well. I can't wait to read more of The Radiant... I am SOOO looking forward to the first time Lucius and Ginny get together. :)
Awesome story... I can't wait to read more! :) Keep up the great work!
Awesome story... I can't wait to read more! :) Keep up the great work!
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four: I am sorry for not having reviewed this sooner. I