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That, right there, I think was my favorite chapter. Have to think on it a bit and will elaborate ... probably at FFnet. LOL

Hiiyah i love this story. The heartfelt bit when Lucius was all weepy and talking about what happened was awesome really well written. I also love the part where ginny spanked Lucius ( although i was a bit jealous) but i had images of lucius in my head and man where they hot lol :L
Hope you continue to update thank you Holly x

What a great chapter. Glad you didn't shy away from including that sex scene because it was HOT. And I love when Lucius throws out the line about Hermione joining them.

I like how you've kept the old Lucius attitude. It really is hard to change one's mindset.

This is such an underrated story. One of my favorites. Looking forward to more.

Another great chapter. I love your version of Lucius. Mature, wizened, but still sexy as hell.



I think my favorite part is when he asks:

Wow, I can't believe how wonderful this story is. Makes me want to go back and completely overhaul everything I've written, to make my language more fluid, descriptive and meaningful. I love all the little details you include, like when Lucius peers out the window through the pictures she's written on them. And your erotica is so damn erotic. Thanks again for writing!

I really, really enjoyed reading this story. Your writing is wonderful and you created a believable and sexy relationship. Why aren't their more Ginny/Lucius fanfics out there?

Thanks for writing!

Really enjoying this one...glad you update so often! That dress is beautiful, btw, definitely suited for a goddess.

Yes, went very well.

That was an exceedingly hot and sensual chapter. Even with the first half of it being merely a description of their aches&pains the morning after ... and I find it fascinating that the descriptions of their aches and pains was so sexy. Will attribute it to your skill as a writer. :-)

One minor quibble ... the visual that came with this line ... "her tongue swiping at the stray rivulets around her chin" ... was kind of weird. It's really hard for a tongue to swipe at it's own chin, unless it's abnormally long. You know? Gene Simmons might be able to pull it off, but the rest of us ... not so much.

Hoping your difficulties ease ...