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for Perfect Love. Perfect Hell

by FalseReality

schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
u got my intrest in this i hope u keep it up its real good
person OpheliaS
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Interesting.
I like how it's getting better and better.
But, there should be a chapter where you fill us all in on why she thinks she's ugly.
Otherwise, it's kind of confusing.
And the POVs are kind of short, but they're good to read.
Besides that, I'm liking the plot of this a lot more.
person OpheliaS
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First Review, whoo.
Uhm, this beginning is so-so, I'll give you that.
Work harder, and I'll be your faithful reader.
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