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by marsmodellover

schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While I'm not a big fan of rape fic, it does happen, especially in war. I hope that Severus will be making some kind of reparations for his actions? Even if he's under the Imperius curse, Hermione is now a victim of an awful crime; I can't really see her just walking away with a casual, 'wasn't your fault, now let's fall in love,' can you? On the other hand, this is exactly the kind of thing Albus would use to further his status in the Death Eaters so Sev could bring back more information. I am interested to see where you go with this. Oh, and just a technical issue, your chapters seem too wide for the screen unless I reduce the font. Not sure why, but it might be something you would want to look into, it's a bit distracting.