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for Insomnia

by marsmodellover

schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent
person Citten
schedule August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes short but they are getting longer. :) i really liked the chapter too! :) poor severus he really thinks the worst of himself. and poor hermione i really wonder how she will keep it from him, and for how long? dont wait to long and update soon! i really do hope that you will not rush through these next nine months! so how will the rest of them take it too? (her friends, the order, her parents and poor severus)
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am trilled to see the update, this is such an interesting and captivating story.
person DarQuing
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Surprisingly, I'm enjoying this story. I don't usually enjoy N/C fics. I think the biggest reason I'm enjoying this story is because the rape scene is at the beginning and it was handled relatively quickly. The only part that's really annoying is the way the screen is stretched, but that's not your fault and its relatively easily fixed by copy and pasting the chapter into a word processing program (such as Wordpad, Notepad, or MS Word).

Please update soon! :)
person jlclark
schedule August 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I am really liking this story. Keep up the great work and please update soon.
Also thanks for changing the margins in the text box; it makes reading much easier :)
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome please please update soon i would lvoe to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil! A cliffhanger! AHH! Okay, so I'm exaggerating. LOL! Good story so far. I can't wait to see where you are going to take this next. True the chapters are short, but I think they work for what you are doing here. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
person jlclark
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is so wrong to leave us hanging like this; I am ready for some real drama to start!!!Nice chapter and thanks for the update :)
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*does a party dance*
Yay she woke up!!! Yay!!!
person Citten
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay i love the story so far and i cant wait to see what you have planned next!!!! i do hope that you have lots planned for the story! i really love long stories! i am not sure how to fix the scoring over problem but if i do i will let you know! :) do update and soon!