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I wish this was fineshed  before it was abandoned it was realy good 

I love it I want more!!! Such a evil cliffhanger, I can't wait to see if Voldemort tries to make Mione a Death Eater too. =O!!

No, you're not. :P You just had to interrupt things when they were getting good, didn't you? :P I don't remember seeing Harry's reaction (aside from realizing that Snape was the one put the bun in her oven).

Please update soon! :)

I like it. Please update soon.

I like it. Please update soon.

Gah! Evil cliffie! :P This looks like its going to be an interesting marriage. :)

Update soon! :)

Wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work! Glad you fixed the text so we don't have to scroll left and right.

just use your imagination. it does get better with time..lol..good story so far..cant wait to read more. im glad yo fixed the layout of the story..it was getting frustrating to read that way..much happier now..lol..good luck with this story.

I like your story so far but I have just a few suggestions for you. One, I noticed and it may just be my laptop but the first five chapters I had to use my side to side scroll bar just to read your story. I suggest you try to make your paragraphs a bit shorter, like instead of your paragraph going to the end of your page when maybe it gets a few inches away start another line. And the second is space out your paragraphs and dialog. This is much easier on you and your reader when they read your story. Other than those two things your story is very good and I can't wait to read more

I'm liking the story. Yes, it has a traumatic beginning, but the fact that Snape regrets this and knows it out of his control is great. Second, I applaud the fact that you made it more to Hermione's personality to recognize it wasn't Snape and forgive him. To those who are screaming this is wrong, it isn't. psychologically women of this kind of trauma can forgive when they WANT to, it's all about how THEY feel and how badly it impacted them. (sorry, old human sexuality calls popping up) I like how you've given each character a more realistic feel and really let them flow in your own way. Keep up the good work!!!!

~Serin