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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww that was awesome : ) loved that Draco finally met andromeda and teddy. and that was so cute how teddy made his face like draco's and his eyes like harry's... if only they could have children, but his isn't mpreg so....
but i still love this chapter. so great!!
looking forward to more!!!
but i still love this chapter. so great!!
looking forward to more!!!
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August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!!
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling the pack is going to split up.
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #3...
Well, knowing this is it...I really did enjoy this glimpse into their world,
which is what this was. Just a small slice o' life for those who are learning
to live together.
I enjoyed Draco & Leila's playtime, it reminded me puppies...grown
puppies. Though I suspect she did it for Harry's benefit. ;-)
Also, glad that Draco can now benefit outside the pack, by having
Andromeda & Teddy in his life now.
Even though there wasn't much time to get to know Josh & _ _ _ _, I
have to admit I liked Hyacinth, that is when she wasn't talkin'. :-)
I think I liked her more when she let her wolf do the 'talking'. For
some reason, it suited her, to ME that is.
She would be an interesting side story.
Let's see what else.....OH! IS this the SECOND time you've moved in
a year & a 1/2?
Well, knowing this is it...I really did enjoy this glimpse into their world,
which is what this was. Just a small slice o' life for those who are learning
to live together.
I enjoyed Draco & Leila's playtime, it reminded me puppies...grown
puppies. Though I suspect she did it for Harry's benefit. ;-)
Also, glad that Draco can now benefit outside the pack, by having
Andromeda & Teddy in his life now.
Even though there wasn't much time to get to know Josh & _ _ _ _, I
have to admit I liked Hyacinth, that is when she wasn't talkin'. :-)
I think I liked her more when she let her wolf do the 'talking'. For
some reason, it suited her, to ME that is.
She would be an interesting side story.
Let's see what else.....OH! IS this the SECOND time you've moved in
a year & a 1/2?
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this!!! Will there be a chapter 3?
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #2...
''The Day[s] in the Life of Draco, the Newest Lupin in the Pack''
This was a neat little view in the slice of life that goes on, since
they ARE just in the woods with only themselves for company. But,
the question is...what now?
They have to get back to society someway, even Remus tried to make that
possible. By the way, is this following canon, is Remus dead? Because
he could have helped a little.
But, then again, there IS Hermione Granger.
''The Day[s] in the Life of Draco, the Newest Lupin in the Pack''
This was a neat little view in the slice of life that goes on, since
they ARE just in the woods with only themselves for company. But,
the question is...what now?
They have to get back to society someway, even Remus tried to make that
possible. By the way, is this following canon, is Remus dead? Because
he could have helped a little.
But, then again, there IS Hermione Granger.
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. Will Draco ever beat Hyacinth?
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel so lazy. I wish I was a dog and could just lie down all day. I have dog envy.
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August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh awesome! I loved this chapter! It explains a lot about Leila, and more about Harry. I'm glad that you wrote this chapter. It proves that even Harry isn't perfect still. He needs Draco, now. And that's good. He doesn't have to carry such a huge burden alone anymore. But while Hyacinth is dom and keeps to herself, and Celia plays with Josh and practices with him, Leila can help harry. I'm glad that Draco is helping out everybody, especially Leila. Until now, all everyone has seen of her was just brewing potions and carrying herself around with an injured foot. Now, Draco has helped her realize that she can truly make a difference. She can help Harry, and that's better than anything.
I'm also happy to notice how well Draco has fit in with everything. He's taking the right course of action as being Harry's partner, as well as one of the pack.
I hope the next chapter tells more, and I hope that it is updated soon. Can't wait, and I really look forward to it : )
I'm also happy to notice how well Draco has fit in with everything. He's taking the right course of action as being Harry's partner, as well as one of the pack.
I hope the next chapter tells more, and I hope that it is updated soon. Can't wait, and I really look forward to it : )
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooo..me likes a lot!*does a freakin' happy dance*
I know people will assume that Hyacinth has a 'thing' for Harry, BUT I
see it's mostly as a test of 'is he worth being the next beta in the pack
OR a beta in general'. Of COURSE, she cares for Harry, but it was NEVER
impressed upon me that she would have been 'in love'.
..and even though the hunt was a tad toned down, I liked it just
as the last.
I know people will assume that Hyacinth has a 'thing' for Harry, BUT I
see it's mostly as a test of 'is he worth being the next beta in the pack
OR a beta in general'. Of COURSE, she cares for Harry, but it was NEVER
impressed upon me that she would have been 'in love'.
..and even though the hunt was a tad toned down, I liked it just
as the last.