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by johnnyobinome

schedule March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That...is so...BRILLIANT!!!! I TOTALLY love it!!! I'm surprised no one thought of it before!!! It's fantastic!!! Can there be a sequel? Please?
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, right, one problem..

One of them would know exactly what happened..

Hermione would know that she was going to do it, because the other Hermione would of come earlier and done it with her :P You portrayed it as neither knew that the other was going to arrive or that neither was expecting it.

Another problem is that it was hard to figure out which Hermione was Hermione. Apart from that - good job. :)
person garsdal
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
always wondered if she did someting like that at some point:D
or even make it a party of 4?
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the concept for this, perhaps mostly because it's something different.

I found this to be very readable, though sadly a little short for my liking.

Do continue! : )