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Why would you ever think to take the story down?

It's wonderful!

I can feel Hermione's suffering. Severus really needs to realize that a relationship is not a bad thing.

The scene in the classroom was delicious, simpli delicious.

Great job, as always!

Please promise to NEVER take the story down! When I'm in one of those moods, I re-read one of your stories to cheer me up! I know I'll want to come back to this one too... I haven't read other reviews lately, but I actually like Gretchen. She's a trouble maker & is shaking up his controlled little world. So, Severus hasn't told Hermione about Gretchen's little secret. When men keep secrets to make women jealous, they usually end up 'on the couch' for a few nights. Maybe Hermione could play a few mind games too - I do like to watch him squirm! *evil grin*

oh boy here we go again... i noticed how severus very expertly avoiding certain things about the night before... how delicious was that spanking.... and he got her off or was in the process of it when minerva came looking for her... wow so gretchen is a lesbian well that should not have been a shock of severus woule feel comfortable with her his heart would neverf be on the line... ok so she walked out of the greaqt hall i wonder what will await him when he gets home???? he may end up seeing those tears that he has been avioding and hermione is not someone to let things be swept under the rug.... so they WILL talk... :-) ok so i had no idea you were thinking about not posting anymore stories... aahhh... honestly if you stopped i am not sure i would continue to read these fanfics... i am glad that you decided to stay...:-)

SG: Another great chapter! Poor Hermione, she has so many insecurities, and issues of self esteem. (why would Severus want her if he could have someone like Gretchen?) And Severus has his own set of insecurities to deal with, I hope they can work through it all together in the end.

As to some peoples comments bringing you down. I really hope you don't take Delicate down, it is a wonderful story and I guess I never thought of you as having a certain 'type' of story that defines you. So how do people say this isn't you. I look at all of your stories individually, they are fiction, fantasy, I wouldn't want each story to be a carbon copy of all the others. Where would the fun be in that? Please keep writing what you find interesting and what pleases you, and in the long run you will make your readers happy, maybe not all of them. There will always be someone with negative comments, but if you are happy with your story that is the most important thing. :)

Severus just can't seem to get it right now can he lol.

I look forward to your updates and it would be awful if you let anyones opinion change your creativity. I teach english to 5th graders (ironic considering I am a horrible speller and worse at grammar) and one of the gifts I have gotten from that expereince is an appreciation for how differently people - even sot-nosed little 10 year old - see the world. Their view is often drastically different from mine. Not better or worse just different and I have come to respect that difference. Please keep sharing your view. I like your view.
Cindy

Oh, that was just wicked, right in front of McGonagall? Too funny!

I don't understand, why should you take the story down? It's very good, has someone upset you? If so, ignore them, your writing is
brill, and I thoroughly enjoy reading all your stories, please do not give up writing and posting, fanfic keeps me and thousand of others going.

Best wishes,

Donavon

I'm not sure why you would have to defend anything you write. If people don't like the tone or story than they shouldn't read, its that simple. I happen to know for a fact that we live in a society were freedom of speech is a right. Screw those who think your story should be taken down. ( Okay I'm off my soapbox now.) Severus is playing a very dangerous game all of a sudden. I think he is getting off on the jelousy Hermione is feeling. He hasn't spoken candidly about Gretchen because he is enloying the power he has over Hermione not to mention the fact that the rules are still in play. (I love the fact that you made Gretchen a lesbian that is a feature I hardly ever see in these stories. He is such a naughty boy!) Well I hope you snap out of your funk soon being overly emotional is never fun. Everyone has there bad days you just have to plow through and wait for the sun to shine again. Well done!!!

Oh you do enjoy making trouble for our awesome twosome lol. Miss Sinclair is completely different then from what i had her pumped up to be, a pleasurable surprise, although it does sour the grapes slightly that Hermione is still getting hurt in the mix up. Nvm, I'm sure shell be enlightened soon enough! Thanks for the timely up date, unfortunetly i will have to go a week without your writings as im doing a spot of travelling before the end of the summmer holidays, first stop, Barcelona! Cant wait to read your updates upon my return! Keep up the great writings! UK FAN!