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for Delicate

by soldiersgirl0709

person hp1fan
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. To be honest I don't think you could ever write one I wouldn't enjoy. I am so glad I found you over here. It was exciting to find storys I hadn't read yet. Of course I can read any of your storys repeatedly and never get tired of them. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending, they finally got there. Great story. Can't wait for whatever is next and the sequel of this when you're ready.
xx
person VoraciousReader
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A perfect ending! Did their clothes go with them or is Hagrid going to find a pile of abandoned laundry on the grounds? Smirk.
person KellyJCR
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel that the ending was perfect. What I have issue with is the fact that readers have put you off writing this story. I still don't understand what was so wrong. You wrote this from a different angle and a different mindset. I believe that is how an author grows stepping out of comfort zones, trying different plots, changing styles etc. I read your blog often and it angers me to no end that some reviewers have no idea how powerful they can possibly be. They have to take responsibility for their words and realize that it is only their opinion. They are not the author and really have no say in the content or how it is written . So with that said I hope you do revisit or sequel this story it was great and I'm sure many of your readers would agree. I'm thrilled that we are getting a visit from our beloved werewolf and whatever follows know that I will be reading. Well done!!!!
person Mia
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was gorgeous. Thank you for it. It was entrancing and I easily got lost in its telling. Thank you again and again.

~Mia
person neelix
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you need to forget about the negative reviews here. I have posted here in the past and although people have been kind and said nice things most of the time, I find the audience perhaps not as discerning and certainly less kind in their critisism as they may be on other sites. This is just my opinion, you understand, but there are other stories in this genre (BDSM) that get a round of applause elsewhere - For The Potion Master's Amusement on Ashwinder is a brilliant example. If you haven't read it, I would recommend it... but back to my point.

Loads of people read fiction here and DON"T review... you only need to compare the reviews to the reader numbers, there is never a close correlation. So, you're only getting a small cross section of opinion, really.

I think this story was awesome, I loved every twist and turn... and the shag in the rain? Well, let's just say I wish mr neelix was home, and I wish it was raining!!

Don't be put off, honey - seriously, this was great writing, as it always is, and I would love to read more SSHG from you. Huge hug xxx
person makaem
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading this story. I'm sorry that you ran into negative responses, and it affected the way you felt about this story.
person trizfores
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
perfect ending. let those 3 magic words keep on coming out between them. they really mean it. the lemons... perfect! rain pouring down, soft grass. the bed one i'll just imagine. :)

can't wait for you next one. as always, brillant!!!
person drowning_not_waving
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! <3
person Kade
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Great use of the characters, and of the other chars like Harry and Ginny...And I liked the ending too...In the rain! I can picture it and its wonderful...Great work!