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I loved the new chapter! Excellent writing. That kiss was powerful mojo! And if it's a sign of things to come, I can't wait for that sex scene you mentioned!

Oh yeah, and as far as Paris Hilton is concerned, I hate the nitwit as well. If only for spoiling the word "hot" for me. It's moments like this I wish the twit would break open a dictionary and learn a new small word. LOL!

Thanks for the update. LOVED IT! Keep up the good work and update when you can!!

That was unbelievable! I was so teary when she laid it out theere for him. Severus is an unintentinal tease. Hermione clearly wants to be dominated and lusted over. Severus knows this after all his snooping and he still wants to dangle it over her head just out of reach. He is so busy trying to be noble that it costs him Hermiones happiness as well as his own. I know I'm probably jumping the gun because it was just a first kiss and things are heating up but, I can see him stopping this before it goes any further. Love the dogs name both yours and Sevs. If your looking for possible senarios I am always fond of a threesome (F/M/M not M/F/F). But whatever floats your boat. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!

First, someone needs to kick Nigel in the balls so hard he can taste them! What a prick! Next, wow! I wish I had the guts Hermione had there to say what's on my mind where men are concerned. lol I am much more the clam up type, but I guess she's been clammed up too long. And, Severus' admission was thrilling. And, I mean that in every sense of the word because, yes, it was a little scary, too. I think Hermione is about to be shocked when that gentle kiss turns to a bit more. lol Bring it on!

Demon...cute name. Congrats on the new addition to your family. I have two, a beagle/brittany spaniel mix and beagle/some kind of terrier mix. They are the loves of my life. :-)

Thanks, hon! HG4eva

yaahhhh!!!! way to go hermione lay it all out there in a moment of emotional turmoil those are some of the best moments... not in real life but in a fic they are nice and evoke all sorts of emotions from ya... woo hoo so they kissed alright i can not wait for all of the extras.... that nigel guy is a prick but severus told here that.... i love the puppy he sounds soo sweet i love dogs i like cats too but not the kind that have to be all over you i love all kinds of dogs though..... ok so wonderful job and i would like request forceful sex where they need each other so bad that they take each other in public somewhere maybe after she has been teasing him or something??? thats my request but you know me anything you write will be perfect...

Hugs right back at ya!! I love the brooding, possessive, jealous Severus! I can only hope that you will put him in some kind of leather outfit, later in the story (not too much later, I hope!!) Severus in leather, SWOON !!

I think it's quite fitting that feelings are confessed in argument format. (ok, ok passionate debate)

I started reading this after you had written several chapters. I now look forward to all of your updates. Sev needs to get over himself and be his dominant sexy self. I would love to see some lite BDSM and some heavy smut. I am reading another SS/HG BDSM over at another fan fiction web site that is wonderful. I can't wait to see where you take this. No professor / student scenerio it's been over done. Maybe some outdoor fun or hallway fun of almost being caught. I rate the two thumbs up and 5 stars.

Okay, I hope you are not getting this review multiple times - I think the last one didn't take. AFF made me type my best guess of some mumbled words as verification that I am not a bot. Didn't work, I guess.

Anyhow, I wanted to tell you how much I love the new story! Hermione and Severus in a D/s relationship - it can hardly get any better for me. You absolutely made my weekend and I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses!

Blogspot, huh? I guess it is futile to try luring you into visiting your LJ again? *gives you best puppy dog eyes possible*

Huh - I submitted a review, but I guess I messed up on the typing two words thingy. The date synopsis was just perfect! Good girl paying her own way - we ladies must always be prepared! You are so good at building anticipation & I'm very excited to see their relationship build. One last thing I forgot to mention in my last review. You responded to my growling comment & I hope you know I'm patiently awaiting some growls (not from Demon).

Poor Hermione such a bad date but the night didn't end so bad now did it!! Can't wait to see what happens next!