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I've never reviewed on this site before but I wanted you to know how much I love this story and all of your stories. I've read everything you've written at least once. They help when I'm depressed. Thank you!

"You are willing to submit your body to me, any way I ask of you?" With that line alone you made me choke on my toast at 6 this morning. (Is it wrong that I read fanfiction instead of the newspaper everyday?) That was the most erotic thing I have ever read. It seems like Severus is not "all in" as they say. He still seems hesitant even though he has openly spoken to Hermione about who he is and what he expects. Hermione has not made any move to give him any clue that his actions are not wanted. This begs to ask the question...Why? Why is he so unsure of himself with her? Is he afraid that it means more to her than it will to him? I know you'll clear it up soon enough but as you know I can't stop speculating. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!!!!!!

ooooohhh you meany, im not impressed with the thick tension you've left your readers with lol. Does Severus really go to bed on his tod? Knowing you have your masterpiece created and finished is a terrible thing to tell me! It means somewhere out their in cyber space is your ending!!! lol i need to know what happens with our favourite pair lol do tell about your other peices in the pipe works can't wait for more to read! :D I'm staying with my fiance this week at his town house, but since he doesnt have internet installed yet, im coming home to check your updates lol sad but true, your an awesome writer keep up the inspiring plots and give us some smut lol. :D uk fan

I LOVE IT!! soooo sooooo hot!! i've read dom-severus and sub- hermione stories before but this one is so different. The others are somewhat harsh in their depictions but with this one i can feel the loving nature of it. i love it!! =] keep it coming!! it's also so very very hot! and i can't wait to read another line!!

Oh man. What torture for Hermione. I feel for her. I really do. I can't wait for more!

There is not much to say other than THAT WAS HOT!!!!

Wow... Serverus is going to make her wait... and knowing him it could be long and drawn out, enough to make Hermione scream! Which, he'll probably do anyway, I have no doubt!
And you actually met someone like Nigel?? UGH! I hope you gave him a piece of your mind, and then some! I swear, sometimes men are no good...
Can't wait to read more!

The tension between the two.....oh so delicious. I can't wait to see what you have in store for these two. Your stories are always worth the wait!

See, I knew I would enjoy your form of Severus-domination (at least so far...lol). He's gentle and honest, but forceful and direct. I also liked that she's not so intimidated/scared that she can't be open and honest herself. Looking forward to more soon and thank you! HG4eva

Another wonderful start.