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I think this may be you best yet. The slow build up is intoxicating instead of annoying. The words chosen are very precise and the imagery draws the reader to believe the actions btw the characters. Hope to see more.

The anticipation is KILLING ME!! My GOD that was a HOT chapter. The urge to not give in, by Severus, is blowing my mind. What willpower!! I assume that it will be that much hotter when he finally does, at least if you are writing it, it will!! :>)

The intensity you get into your writing is incredible. wow.

Heeelllllll yes! lol awesome kick start to my weekend lol, I'm gutted i have to go driving now, have to get a head on my shoulders instead of recollecting your chapter, my tutor is a balding middle aged old man lol, nothing like our severus. Never a disappointment cant wait till your next installment keep em' coming lol. Love your work cant wait to see what happens next!!!! Quick question before i head out, is Severus and Hermiones relationship going to constant slave dom? Or will they keep their friendship in there too? It seems a shame to let sex dismiss it. (Sex with severus?? Am I stupid lmao) Uk fan

It very hard to have a cohearent thought after that chapter but, here it goes. I'm not well versed in the world of sub/dom relationships but from what I think I know insn't the subs role is to respect and completely give up all possible control in every aspect? I just thought the fact that she called Sev "infuriating" pushes the boundries a bit. I thought that lack of respect and name calling was a no no in these type of relationshps. However you have stated that there are different types of sub/dom pairs and maybe it is implyed that they have their own rules. You did say that Sev was looking for a trust he never recieved so this indescretion is acceptable to this particular experience. I think I'm bringing a one sided knowledge into a story that is more completely rounded to the genre. (Its clear that I've lost my mind.) Your line "You have the prettiest pussy I have ever seen." is completely to blame for that. Can't wait for more. You are doing an incredible job with this one. Well done!!!!!!

I think that for too many inexperienced readers and writers, as well as the merely salaciously interested, they see the acoutrements, the leather and the whips, without knowing the sensuality that spreads throughout like ink through water. My own experience is not so wide, but there must be more to it than mere torture or it would only be practiced in the most deranged fashion by those who really need psychiatric care. Only true affection and the most diligent care would enable the participants to explore their widest boundaries. You seem to be protraying those elements well in this story. Bravo.

*blinks rapidly* I think I may have blacked out there... Damn!!!!! That was HOT HOT HOT!!! You just improved my mood with some serious hotness! If it's this intense without touching, I can't wait to see what happens to her when there is some touching!!!

Wow, just wow. This scene was very well done. Your imagery is fantastic.

That was the best lesson ever lol!!!

this is already sooooooooooo hot and it is only started. totally enjoying the story