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Why do I sense a bit of drama coming with this Sinclair woman. I don't think its as simple as Severus let on.

Ms. Granger is turning into quite a little deviant . I wish I had the moxie to do half the things she does in this story.

I'm surprised Minerva and Molly don't try and attempt an intervention of some sort.

I love the fact that Severus will not let on when or where he is finally going to "take" her. Sometimes patience is the best form of foreplay.

Can't wait for more. Glad to hear you have many more stories coming up. Well done!!!!!!

So glad you're feeling better! Kidney stones are no joke!
Loved the way sev was pulling at her strings while talking to minerva. I suspect she is trying to get him to show that other headmaster around in hopes she lures him away from hermione.
I can tell that's not gonna happen! Hermione and I share something in common in wait. Im an extremely impatient person myself, and by this time I would have just ripped the the man's clothes off and had my way! Lol.
What did you think of this weeks past episode of True Blood?

Hmmm I smell trouble a brewing (no pun intended lol!) I have a feeling that Ms. Gretchen Sinclair is going to cause some problems in the future.

I know I am behind a chapter in reviews, so here is Ch 14, can't tell what was hotter. Harry and Ginny (SOOO don't see him that way, even after the pic you sent me =) ) or Hermione and Severus watching! I was soo born in the wrong time, I am thinking it should have been sometime around Caligula, such dirty thoughts running through my head!! If only I had the gift to put them to paper as you do!! Damn it!! Chapter 15, Severus is so bad, that in my mind, is what makes him so GOOD. I have to say that Severus having some fun with Molly and Minerva is tickling my fancy also, What sticks in the mud!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Maybe this next one he MIGHT give in to her??

Ohhhh, i hope my spider senses are incorrect thinking this miss sinclair is going to cause trouble between our two! Another great chapter awaiting update uk fan!

YAAHHHH for no pain BOOOOO for work.... :-)... loved this chap i esp loved severus' pov at the beginning and i think it helped us to get a glimpse into his thoughts a little more ohhh how hot was that watching harry and ginny well now harry and ginny know i wonder what is going to happen from here... can not wait for an update... and i am glad that your feeling better!!!!!

I don't know who is more impatient me or Hermione. The wait for the big bang up is killing me. I do think however that Hermione is slightly off on Sevs feelings for her. He did take great care with her while she was sick. I know he played it off as payback but, if someone feels burdened by a task it is not done nearly as well as someone who earnestly wants to do it. He is still pulling away but he is in a loosing battle with his heart I'm afraid. When he finally admits it to himself its going to scare him to death. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!

I forgot to mention the fact that I was slightly squicked by the all natural Harry. For some bizare reason I have great difficulty with his sexuality. I can't figure that out for the life of me. Never the less well done!

Finally some insight into snapes mind. I wonder how it will go for them Noe that they've been found out. Once again, lovely chapter.

I love your story and your exploration of D/s. It's very well thought out and intelligently written. I am riveted by your work.

I just wanted to leave a comment also to express my confusion about the apparent negative reviews you are getting. I haven't read them, but if they are implying that Severus is being abusive, these people are clueless. First off, most D/s out there (especially on this site unfortunately for aff) is horribly written and assume the submissive desires abuse and that the dominant is that abuser. Nothing about your story is like that. In fact, it's more slow developing than even well written D/s, so my suggestion is to ignore these idiots completely and stick to your vision. I know myself and probably most of your readers want to read your vision of this story with you sacrificing anything to pander to some idiots.

Bravo my dear on a job well done.