rate_review Reviews

sooo....im liking it so far, interesting twist to the story, n i like ron and pansy....idk why but it makes sense to me hahaha and i found it so awesome that he saved her and comforted her when she was rapped. but just....the 4th chapter is where i am now....and seeing as u have rape in ur story as happening to pansy right off the bat, and draco is a caring friend to pansy....u wud think he wud b more sensitive to the issue of rape, and hermione is deff showing sensitivity to the issue of rape right from the get go. so whats bugging me about this, is tech what draco just did to hermione (in the 4th chapter), was done so without consent so cud be considered as a form of rape/assault...bc she did say no right off the bat, and he just grabbed her, silenced and locked the door, physically bound her hands with his own, and just pushed his free hand into her pants. i thought for sure he would have backed off and gotten her verbal consent before he continued on. but he didnt, he just physically held her against the wall and forced himself on her. and i was shocked that he didnt stop when she said to stop, and that she wasnt upset that he overpowered her and forced himself on her, regardless of if she enjoyed it or not. in the moment she was scared, she said no. i still deff want to read this story, it was recommended on a dramione tumblr page, and i like how there is little hate between the characters....i just wished to point that factor out, as constructive criticism.

HA!! I was thinking Neville.... but then wondered how that would go with Draco asking... Heck, I'm STILL wondering that even with it Proven!

Delightful story. I can imagine Hermione over-thinking and over-studying this matter. It was really fun seeing Draco as concerned 'teacher' rather than someone interested for purely selfish reasons. Perhaps stretching the character MO a bit... but all in all it worked. I liked it.

Thanks so much for writing!

love the story.... cant wait to see what draco up to ??

Great smutty piece. I enjoyed it immensely. I liked the ending too. Great that it was Neville. I'm a fan of yours!

Neville??? omg wow!!! hahaha he turn himself into Draco so they could have a threesome... hahaha good twist!!!
Great story!! you did a great job!!!

Wow I never saw that coming, what a great read.

AHHHHH I NEVER SAW THAT COMING!!!! Effing BRILLIANT!!!

Okay, LOVING the way this story is turning out! I giggled when Viktor showed up and Draco automatically got jealous. *love* I hope he confesses all to Hermione! But I confess you have me stumped as to who her polyjuiced lover was, I was *convinced* it was Ron. Alas. I just want to reiterate how much I love all of your stories, even though normally I am a hardcore Ron/Hermione shipper. I just love the way you write Ron & Pansy, and therefore your Draco & Hermione are equally believable. More please! :)

LOVE IT!

LOL! you got me on that one--I really wasn't expecting Neville! Very nice.