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by 4872luk

person csuar057
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was unbelievably hot. It's really hard to come across well written smut but I definitely enjoyed reading that. I also like that you started the story with Harry and Lucius having an established relationship. I think it will make your story interesting since the reader doesn't have to focus on waiting for them to get together. I really hope you decide to continue with this story because I think you have a good start as well as alot of potential for this particular story. Looking forward to more Harry/Lucius yumminess ;) Plz update soon!
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your HP/LM fic, its great so far. Hope you'll update it asap.
person MeToo
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmm delicious! I love Lucius he can be so decadent so you can truly have fun writing him. I see him as being very kinky and always love him paired with a horny young submissive Harry. Good work, I can't wait to see more.

MeToo