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for Potions in the Moonlight

by Nghtcrwlr

schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
starstruck86 thanks for the tip off ^^ See THIS is what happens when I am kept awake until 6am to finish chapters! Pasha needs sleep >< otherwise she can't beta properly... Glad you're still paying attention.
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story does not want to be reviewed. I'm sure of it. I just attempted to post two reviews and both of them disappeared into the void of internet nontransferance. This is frustrating and I'm not rewriting them again.

Just know that after reading 6 chapters, I think your story rocks.
Have a nice day and keep up the good work. (If this one doesn't go through, I'm just leaving stars.)
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You spoil me with so many chapters in a day ;)

Oh noes. :( Drama indeed. Good on Severus for pushing off Lucius though, i had a feeling he was going to cause trouble.

But now Severus has stormed off and *sigh*. Please update again soon so I can sleep peacefully knowing he's alright? ;)
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was beautiful! Really lovely. (And hot where it counted, but lovely applies to the part where they were talking at the beginning. Severus' depiction is very believable, his hurt and vulnerability especially so.

Can't wait to see what happens next... hope they remember to get a house elf to change Lucius' sheets, or that could be difficult to explain! ;)
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters in a day *bounces* So you can have two reviews.

Now, i'm no fan of beast, but thought that was quite tastefully handled. And Severus has at least learned his lesson. Just such a shame that his 'first time' had to be like that. But if he'd just listened to Remus...

More please :)
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel kinda stupid that I've never reviewed this story. Don't beat me ^^;;; just to let you know that I know I am ridiculous and small but Remus loves you. (And Pavel too. We're all having tea and missing you...)
person jlclark
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is my first SS/RL fic and I must say I am really enjoying it. I do not have anything other stories to compare this to but I think you are doing a nice job explaining the character emotions and over all the plot is interesting. Thanks for the great work and please update soon.
person Snakelette
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I love this a lot :) Please update soon!
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Second chapter every bit as delicious as the first.

And, 'you've got something on your face'... *snort* Brilliant! Looking forward to more!