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Smutty, angsty and enjoyable. What more could I ask for? (Only one thing: please get breathe and breath right - breathe - drawing air in and out of your lungs; breath - like a breath of wind. It's been quietly driving me mad! ;) ) SP

This story was last edited in 2010!!! WHAT? I was hoping this would be a complete story, but instead you have left many readers unsatisfied and angry at the current situation! GRR! Please! Finish the story!! :D

I love this story and though I was disappointed when you veered from the books by causing Sev to be turned into a werewolf, I loved it nonetheless. I need a happily ever after please! :) And since you veered from the books anyway, please kill Lucius for us. Or better yet, torture him slowly until he breaks down into the kissa** he grows up to be and not the sick, sadistic, brilliant, leader you have him portray as a child. YES! XD <3 Remus and Severus together forever, raising beautiful Rowena in a happy, safe environment!! <3

Thank you!
Well done all in all!

great story! please update! I'm dying to know what happens!

MORE?
Brittany wants more...
Do you plan on finishing this?

Wow. This was an amazing start! It's sad and sweet at the same time! I'm completely hooked!
Your grammar etc isn't the best, but the style and tone and characterisation makes up for it. Several times. :)
I'm so glad I found this story. You've done an amazing job. :)

I love this story! It has amazing love scenes, amazing characterizations, and its just a fantastic story! I look forward to its next updates. ^_^

Damn it I hope Lucius die a very painful death for what he did to Severus. But I love the story. It's hard to read because I love Severus but the story is so good I can't help but read it.

Wow, this was really intense! I hope they arrest Lucius for what he has done to Severus...

wow! :( poor severus. the next transformation is probably going to be sheer hell with all the hell he's been through the day before. :(

Oh wow! Poor Severus is gonna get it hard...