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A great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

NIIIICE - love how they "found" each other.

I am really enjoying this story. I know it hasn't been a barrel of laughs so far, but I think that adds to the realism. :-) I love the way you write, too. Looking forward to more soon! Thank you, HG4eva

i cant wait to see where this one is going, i like the start a lot... usually when i read probation stories the sentences seem pathetically low considering all the crimes the family commited whereas yours seem much more believable... i wonder if hermione will be giving him one to one lessons on how to be a muggle or will her job at the book store come in handy for him, learning how to cook and whatnot i can imagine him approaching cooking like potions, reading from a book and getting it horribly wrong then eventually asking hermione for her help... but hey its your story ile be happy with whatever you decide... keep it up!!

A great chapter. I look forward to reading more. I thought it was sad that Lucius died, but it was probably what he wanted instead of living as a muggle for the rest of his life. I hope that Draco and Narcissa will be able to live as muggles for the time they were sentenced without too many problems.

This is a great start. I look forward to reading more.

WOW - how much can they withstand....great showdown...

Hello,

This is a promising story so far. The only major errors I could catch with a quick reading were the use of "Lucian" twice instead of Lucius and "loosing" instead of "losing." I look forward to reading more of your story.

Thanks ofr sharing with us.

Jillian

I really liked your other story and can't wait to see where you take this one. I totally agree with your decision on keeping that one a one-shot and making this a longer version. I'm super excited for your updates! Will he be a motorcycle mechanic in this one too? ;) HOT!