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for Sweet Justice

by Queenie7

person Rosamund
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If you do, please don't do it on the other site (you know, the one I get alerts on ;) On this site, it would give even more reason to enjoy Ron finding out. But not in the realm of just Draco/Hermione (which I love).
schedule August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
feels like a D/H story to me...she's the one helping him, she's the one bonding. Harry would seemed forced...it was a school thing...
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT and sexy. I loved her assertiveness and I love how they found each other and I love how they don't have regrets. And I love how open they are to seeing where this might lead.
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful chapter. I look forward to the next one.
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! That was fun :)
OH! And one little thing: "Her skin was hot and taught to the touch..." You want the word 'taut', as in tightly drawn, not 'taught' as in the past tense of teach.

More, please!! I love it.
person mhaj78
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FREAKING AWESOME and OH SO UNBELIEVABLY HOT. Whew! I'm dying here! Off to a cold shower...holy crap...
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more to see what happens.
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! This is just getting better and better! I hate that you left it there! Please finish that scene!!!!!
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
smexy yet sweet
person Rosamund
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Editing? Who cares to notice anything "wrong" when your story is sooo delicious! In more ways than one ;) Oh, I cannot wait to read more! Awesome story! Would be great at some point, once the relationship has progressed, Ron shows up to take her out or something. Oh, Sorry Ronniekins, I'm her boyfriend. So no, she cannot come out tonight. I'll be in her bed! ;)