rate_review Reviews

Oh please no Harry or slash. (just my two cents)
I love your writing and way this story has gone so far.
I like Draco and Hermione especially the way they have been helping each other. That bond you have created so far is wonderful.

I prefer to leave it just Hermione and Draco. No Potter needed. =D

I don't think adding bringing Harry/Draco into this would be good for the story. "warning "personal opinion here....
(((don't let all your favorite flavors run together they are best when they complement each other but can be sampled as distinct creations.)))
I think if you are inspired to write hp/dm right now go do that and put this on hold. I think you had something good going on when you were writing the other chapters to "Life Experience" and here you are just starting to find some interesting character development. Set this story aside if you have to coming back to it may allow you to see new and interesting directions the for the story structure. Add the hp/dm lemon only if you feel it will benefit the plot. will it add conflict? will it derail the direction you were initially intending to go? ........ i am not against a good Drarry fic but bangi'n Harry so soon after getting into Hermione's pants, makes Draco look a little man-slutty.....(not intended to be cruel)

I really like this story. I am a huge fan of Dramione, but I'd rather not have Harry. Unless, of course, it is a triad relationship with Hermione, Draco and Harry - that's a another favorite ship of mine.

Your story, do what you like. I would say to keep it in the Het section because the ending result will be D/Hr. I have femslash for a background character in one of mine but the main plot is het. I think it should be fine. Just put up the proper warnings :)

See you Monday, then!

Personally, I would rather the pairing stay Dramione. I'm not a slash fan unless it's a triad pairing.

Keep it were it is.

I'll admit first off to a complete and unapologetic bias before offering my opinion. I generally don't read M/M fics. Just doesn't do it for me. Ergo, it seems weird/out of place to add DM/HP action into this story.
I would also like to apologize that my first review of this story is such as this. I've been following it for the last couple of chapters now, and I'd just like to say that it is very well written. What a hot chess game!
Please feel free to take my opinion on the forward motion of this story with a grain of salt; it is your story, after all. I have no great hubris as a reader which allows me to think my opinion should direct what happens. :)

personally, I would rather see it stay as HG/DM, but that's just my input. looking forward to the next chap!

I'm not big on slash stories but I like your writing so I have no doubt that you will keep my interest either way. Not to mention, Draco is hot so I'm pretty sure that I would love him anyway.