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for Everybody Here Wants You

by microwavebubbles

schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good luck in Uni! And, thanks for the update. I do hope you get to do so again soon. I look forward to seeing them come together. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
person Jacquie
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good thanks for sharing can't wait for next chapter. :)
person Anon
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Please post more soon!
person catstaff
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An interesting beginning. Looking forward to seeing how it progresses. I only wish I could take a selfish shower, lol, but we've only one bathroom in the house so no one's allowed to take as long as they want to in there... someone else always needs in.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi again. Okay, I pick Ron, just to be different and give the poor boy a vote. lol I can't wait to see what this is for. :-) As for the updates...NICE! I like the sexual tension, confusion, his snark, and her embarrassment. This is going to be fun! Thanks, HG4eva
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I can't wait to read more. Oh and... I vote for Harry. :]
person neelix
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really great! And of course Harry is winning the vote! Ron is... well... RON! lol
person jacqui
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the mini lemons. Very fun! One comment about Snape though. What is up with him? How much of a wuss is he if he "vowed never to see her again" just because she made a drunken pass at him years ago. Some deatheater he is, I hope he grows a backbone.

I like your writing and this story, can't wait for your next update
person jacqui
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oops, I forgot to vote.... Harry!